That was a lot of build up for a Justin Bieber joke. I will admit, "Pull me out." part made me chuckle.
You still need to improve your filming/editing.
- Don't be afraid to use multiple shots, try not to film in one sequence.
- Cameras should either zoom, pan, or tilt, they should never actually move around unless it's for a scenery thing.
- Rule of thirds, look it up.
- There was a "gap" with a cut between two shots. (Black space, it appears for like half a second.)