The video was boring and cliche but I will have to admit your camera work/editing is a stuff ton better than 90% of people who make Blockland videos.
You understand the fact to have multiple shots rather than one continuous sequence, although your camera angles weren't so great you still took a risk at trying different styles, and I didn't see any rookie editing mistakes such as "gaps".
Keep up the work, keep practicing, and I'll be glad to see your future work. Just try to be a bit more creative or get someone else to write a script for you.