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Author Topic: Land CrCIA TDM [W.I.P.] (PROGRESS PEOPLE)  (Read 2660 times)

Land CrCIA TDM
[W.I.P.]


Story

In 2015, an German-Austrian drilling company, Schneider Bohrgerät (Fictional, mind you) decides to drill in the middle of the rural mountain town of Starkes Inneres (Also fictional. They discover a mineral so precious and dangerous, the otherwise quite brave, blond bimbo-filled drilling company wisely decided to abandon the place. The local townspeople didn't notice, and the ones who did, didn't care.

25 years later, in 2040, a group of curious hikers (who happen to be British scientists) stopping for the night at the local hotel enter the grounds of the abandoned factory, and discover thousands of tons of the mineral. They take it back to their hotel room, and find out the mineral can absorb any kind of shock or impact, and is extremely sturdy. They make tests back in Britain, and discover they can make almost impenetrable vehicles, buildings, extremely powerful and accurate bullets, armor, just about anything. They keep the tests a secret, and go back a year later, only to find out the German-Austrian Government waiting for them, claiming the mineral for Germany-Austria. It turns out that a German-Austrian sleeper spy in Britain had found out about the tests. The scientists were silently deported out of Germany-Austria, and when they got home, they reported to the Parliment, who declared war against Germany-Austria. They then send one platoon of British troops to Starkes Inneres.


PROGRESS (So far)

German-Austrian Base




^Derp :/



















German-Austrian Midpoint





Rate x/10
Constructive Criticism is allowed :D
Map made my Gravity Cat
« Last Edit: June 18, 2011, 01:47:24 PM by Red Cube »


Nice concept, but I don't like the execution.
Yes, I know it's WIP, but still. The buildings don't look very appealing to me. But maybe I'm mistaken and it's going to be awesome.

Too boxy and lacking detail.

Too boxy and lacking detail.
I just started it this morning. do you think I've been working on it for a week or something?
Nice concept, but I don't like the execution.
Yes, I know it's WIP, but still. The buildings don't look very appealing to me. But maybe I'm mistaken and it's going to be awesome.
The buildings really don't look appealing at the moment. I'm thinking of remodeling the German-Austrian base into a two-story ski lodge, or at least something similar. The British base is going to be a group of large tents, I think. I also have to figure out another way to get the Humvee onto lower ground without the yucky window ramp, but I don't want the other team to steal the vehicle right off the spawn.

EDIT: You are mistaken, King Leo. it is going to be awesome.
« Last Edit: June 13, 2011, 09:10:24 PM by Red Cube »

i dont like
Lets see your builds!
Every topic I see your being a major starfish and treating builders like stuff, not as much as in this one as others. Give some constructive critisizm and dont just post "I dont like," "Ugly." Tell him how he can make it better! He may build on a different level then you! Big loving deal!

Lets see your builds!
Every topic I see your being a major starfish and treating builders like stuff, not as much as in this one as others. Give some constructive critisizm and dont just post "I dont like," "Ugly." Tell him how he can make it better! He may build on a different level then you! Big loving deal!
Somebody has some sense, at least :)

Somebody has some sense, at least :)
Some people dont read the ruless bro.

Still using a UH-1 in 2040? Maybe the MAS transport or whatever it's called would work better...

Nice story, build sucks.

Lets see your builds!
Every topic I see your being a major starfish and treating builders like stuff, not as much as in this one as others. Give some constructive critisizm and dont just post "I dont like," "Ugly." Tell him how he can make it better! He may build on a different level then you! Big loving deal!
Wow this is like the biggest unnecessary overreaction I have ever seen on these forums

I agree with what Mushroom said

Wow this is like the biggest unnecessary overreaction I have ever seen on these forums

I agree with what Mushroom said
It's just a helicopter, but I can change it to MAS Air Transport.
Nice story, build sucks.
haters gotta hate, don't you.
« Last Edit: June 13, 2011, 06:37:32 PM by Red Cube »


You tried to hard.
This is the second day I've been working on it :/