Ethan & Edwin: Our Steampunk (Or Something) Adventure

[HellHound]

Thanks, I had written the continuation for this when I was away for two days, but for some reason my parents messed up and I can't get it until later. Anyways the continuation featured the characters in the air with their hot air balloon. On a side note, does zeppelins exist in steampunk?

Yes of course.

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[Sickan]

They do

Thank god otherwise I'd have to rewrite much of the next part :)

[Sickan]

Bump until I can post the continuation.

[Sirrus]

yeah, now that Barnabas mentions it it really does seem like this is something you wrote for school explaining what happened in a story.

Also, a steam engine and a coal engine are basically the same thing. Steam, which turns the turbines which make the engine run, is created by heating water with coal or some other medium, but if we're talking about steam engines, it's typically coal because that's what worked best.

[Sickan]

yeah, now that Barnabas mentions it it really does seem like this is something you wrote for school explaining what happened in a story.

Also, a steam engine and a coal engine are basically the same thing. Steam, which turns the turbines which make the engine run, is created by heating water with coal or some other medium, but if we're talking about steam engines, it's typically coal because that's what worked best.

Yeah... I wrote more but once again I forgot to post it. *I make a silly face because no one will believe that I've written a fleshed out version*. And thanks for telling me, I had no idea how a steam engine works. *silly* and I'm pretty sure I'm gonna have to rewrite this whole stuff if it's gonna be any better.

[Sickan]

Now I'm gonna show how much bad ass I am and rewrite it!

EDIT: WHY IS IT SO HARD TO WRITE IN YOUR SECOND LANGUAGE? WHY DON'T I KNOW THE WORD FOR THE THING YOU DO TO THE STOVE BEFORE YOU START COOKING? WHY GOD, WHY?
EDIT 2: IS IT FIRED UP THE STOVE OR STARTED THE STOVE OR SAT ON THE STOVE OR WHAT? GOOGLE TRANSLATE WON'T HELP ME EITHER! *panic*!
EDIT 3: IS THERE EVEN STOVES IN STEAMPUNK!? I DON'T EVEN KNOW?!?

[Sickan]

3rd post in a row :)

I was thinking if I'd let this die and post the remake of the story later when I've written more. What do you say?

[Narkro555]

If you can get through an entire day in a single paragraph, you're doing it wrong. The idea isn't bad, the detail is.