Desert UPDATE now a find the keys challenge!

[Donro98]

This is a simple desert, contains desert oasis, dunes, stones, and my monument (don't touch the statue!!!!). This is now a desert find the keys build. There are 4 keys, red, yellow, blue, and green. Find them all to win! Of course you could still use it for an RP just remove the keys and centerprint messages and viola!
Buildfacts: Uses my monument build.
Brick count : 800+ bricks
Meant for simple desert rpgs,

Pics: Monument and statue and surrounding canyon 
Entrance to monument.
What happens if I touch the statue?
Oasis

What is up with those trees, wait, what is that? (Look around after).

Over view
Credits: Me for building.
 Everyone who gave advice! But I will improve, more ideas though please!
Thank you, constructive constriticism only. Feel free to rate!
Requires wedges, random brick-pack, , and the jvs brick pack with the cabin door. It now also requires zone bricks/events and Jakeblade mining axe/pick.

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[-1 Up]

6 / 10.
It has lots of potential.
It, however, needs a lot of detail.
I like the cacti.

[Donro98]

6 / 10.
It has lots of potential.
It, however, needs a lot of detail.
I like the cacti.

Elaborate please.

[_Dark_]

It's to plain.

[Blockoman]

Positives:
>Monument has potential
>Key adds an RPG-"collect-the-items" feel that can be expanded upon

Negatives:
>Completely flat ground, with barely any detail
>Duplicated cacti
>Flat, boxy walls
>Very few colors used
>Palm trees are bland

Overall: 4/10

You say you intend for it to be simple, but there is no excuse for something that simple. This is a building game! A couple more hundred bricks won't make you lag! Try to add some more little details and variety into the environment for the next addition.

[-1 Up]

6 / 10.
It has lots of potential.
It, however, needs a lot of detail.
I like the cacti.

Gah, I just realized I'm a hypocrite.
Anyways, the trees are very..flat and they could use some detail, like more detailed leaves using ramps or somesuch.
The monument is..okay. Not great, but not bad either. It could use some more detail, like emmiters or Paint FX.
Please note that this is my opinion...

[Donro98]

Positives:
>Monument has potential (Thanks, will expand.)
>Key adds an RPG-"collect-the-items" feel that can be expanded upon ( Will do)

Negatives:
>Completely flat ground, with barely any detail (fixed I think).
>Duplicated cacti (Fixed)
>Flat, boxy walls (Will fix)
>Very few colors used (fixed)
>Palm trees are bland (fixed)

Overall: 4/10

You say you intend for it to be simple, but there is no excuse for something that simple. This is a building game! A couple more hundred bricks won't make you lag! Try to add some more little details and variety into the environment for the next addition. (Will do thanks for criticism)

Edits in ()Updates, now requires Zone bricks and events, more constructive criticism, and thanks. Rate please. and -1up thanks, and the monument will be updated. I just forgot.

[TheArmyGuy]

Deserts tend to not have huge 90 degree walls.
Work on that.

[Donro98]

Slight bump for updates!

[Bisjac]

i never seen that style of tree on blockland. :D