it looks sort of like they're just standing in a desolate gray landscape
maybe draw some buildings in the background, or something? maybe some clouds and a sun?
Your lines are sketchy and feathery.
yeah i know
i'm trying to figure out how to make outlines that satisfy myself. i tried no outlines a few times, it didn't really feel like what i wanted. i know i don't want black outlines, too cartoony and feels like vector work.
i don't really know how to figure it out though, so basically i'm playing around with these weekly thing-an-episode drawings. forcing myself to do a drawing within a day is hard to adjust to, since i usually would take three or more days on a drawing i cared about