Simple Reminder:That's not how I write.
I dislike starting a new paragraph each time somebody new speaks.
Hey man, zombies are at my house! Can I borrow your walls of text to build a barrier around my house?
But that's your opinion, I guess.
Sure.
No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.
No, you need to learn how to write properly before I actually get around to reading it and deciding if your actual material is garbage or not.
forget you, if you hate how I write then don't read it. I'm not going to go through a week of work (Not that much work a day) just to please one man.
Qwepir is omnipotentYou're not allowed to do anything your way in his presence.
This is not something just to please myself, this is something he will need to know to graduate. For now, I'm just going to assume that he is still in elementary school No and has simply never learned how to write dialogue. Incorrect If that is the case, then the sooner you start learning how to write properly, the better prepared you will be for the future. If that isn't the case, then holy stuff get your act together.