Author Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship for Blockheads: General V2  (Read 8927010 times)

Well I'll take that into note.

Simple Reminder:

That's not how I write.
Simple Reminder:



I dislike starting a new paragraph each time somebody new speaks.

It's extremely helpful for clarifying who is speaking.

But that's your opinion, I guess.

Also I got told to kill myself for trying to post another okay.jpg :C

Jokey's story is quite good, I'd say.

Now go read it.

Hey man, zombies are at my house! Can I borrow your walls of text to build a barrier around my house?

Hey man, zombies are at my house! Can I borrow your walls of text to build a barrier around my house?
Sure.

But that's your opinion, I guess.
No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.

Sure.
No silly you're supposed to be INSULTED
No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.

No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.
So basically.
I'm a stuffty writer, and should never write again?
Okay.

No, you need to learn how to write properly before I actually get around to reading it and deciding if your actual material is garbage or not.

No, you need to learn how to write properly before I actually get around to reading it and deciding if your actual material is garbage or not.
forget you, if you hate how I write then don't read it. I'm not going to go through a week of work (Not that much work a day) just to please one man.

forget you, if you hate how I write then don't read it. I'm not going to go through a week of work (Not that much work a day) just to please one man.


Qwepir is omnipotent

You're not allowed to do anything your way in his presence.

No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.

Holy stuff Qwepir lighten up

forget you, if you hate how I write then don't read it. I'm not going to go through a week of work (Not that much work a day) just to please one man.
Qwepir is omnipotent
You're not allowed to do anything your way in his presence.
This is not something just to please myself, this is something he will need to know to graduate. For now, I'm just going to assume that he is still in elementary school and has simply never learned how to write dialogue. If that is the case, then the sooner you start learning how to write properly, the better prepared you will be for the future. If that isn't the case, then holy stuff get your act together.

This is not something just to please myself, this is something he will need to know to graduate. For now, I'm just going to assume that he is still in elementary school No and has simply never learned how to write dialogue. Incorrect If that is the case, then the sooner you start learning how to write properly, the better prepared you will be for the future. If that isn't the case, then holy stuff get your act together.
Alright, if it makes you throw so much of a temper tantrum then I'll do the next one the way to please oh lord of all fanfics.

Truth is, you're flipping your stuff and downright insulting him because he is trying to tell you how to improve your writing skill. He is coming off as an starfish, but insulting him isn't going to do anything.

jesus christ it's a fanfiction not an english assignment