the grammar, most spelling, etc
wat.
i you're wondering about why i replaced "I" with "ah" in AJ's and Mac's dialogue is because they have a southern drawl.
as for other grammar i'm going assume it's fine.
i know good fanfics that write the same way i do.
also no spelling is fine. it's all been fixed now.
the only words LibreOffice counts as wrong is Fluttershy and Equestria.