when did you become stephen king.
it looks fine to me.
it looks fine to everyone else.
no need to berate me because you can see invisible errors.
"Oh dear, I hope he'll be fine all by him self. He's so little after all,"
Himself is one word"Now listen, ahm sure he'll be al'right."
alright = without doubt I'm guessing you were using "all right," but that's two wordsI would go through more, but it's almost 4 am
You said "nortorious," by the way. it's "notorious"