lol'd
I pushed the post button on accident before I was finished.
where have I seen that excuse before?
EDIT:It has been up for a while, I'm tired of waiting to give you live feedback so closing.
Not trying to hate on this or anything, but the build...well, sucks, to be honest. And the events take no more then 5 seconds to make.
What do you mean "closing"?
The events are decent/a little above average, but there's only one or two evented bricks. If I were you I'd expand upon this, add eventes everywhere you could, and add as many variables (not the events, but choices/outcomes) to it as you can.
Did you look at the events?
Screw VCE, I use tons of Relays because I can't be bothered to understand VCE.
Exactly what I had in mind. Also, MonkeyBoy, I've never seen you on the forums.