Author Topic: Make your own Creepypasta  (Read 9375 times)

Attempt at trying to make one of the stories like you find on www.creepypasta.com. Or just post the ones you find best.
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Do it.

We already have a scary stories thread.

It died. Besides, this one is for making your own.

There was once a person.

And he was so ugly that everyone died.

The end.


THE FORUMS ARE LEAKING HYPER REALISTIC BLOOD


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There was once a person.

And he was so ugly that everyone died.

The end.

I got the reference. ;D

There was once a person.

And he was so ugly that everyone died.

The end.
That didn't help at all ;~;

My turn.

Snow day.
Ah, that day. Let me try to recall. Yes, I remember now.
It was a friday, I think. I cannot remember much, nor do I want to.
It was a snow day, white as far as the eye can see.
The day before, one of the kids in our class had gone missing,
you know, the one with the missing brother.
That day me, Gavin and Charlie went out to the park, where the snow built up.
We started throwing snow balls as someone cried for help.
I let Gavin and Charlie stay there.
The person looked 15, if not older. He looked as if he had been frozen.
'My brother, he fell and broke his leg! Help him, please!'
I took a look at the boy, by god, It was Jimmy, the kid who went missing yesterday!
I attempted to pick him up, but failed. I called for the brother to help, but he had gone.
I looked back at the boy and, if I not mistaken,
I saw the brother, laid with a knife in his back, his face cold
and the blood dried as he was gently covered in snow.
« Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 05:20:38 PM by Skorpion »

My turn.

Snow day.
Ah, that day. Let me try to recall. Yes, I remember now.
It was a friday, I think. I cannot remember much, nor do I want to.
It was a snow day, white as far as the eye can see.
The day before, one of the kids in our class had gone missing, you know, the one with the missing brother.
That day me, Gavin and Charlie went out to the park, where the snow built up.
We started throwing snow balls as someone cried for help. I let Gavin and Charlie stay there.
The person looked 15, if not older. He looked as if he had been frozen.
'My brother, he fell and broke his leg! Help him, please!'
I took a look at the boy, by god, It was Jimmy, the kid who went missing yesterday! I attempted to pick him up, but failed. I called for the brother to help, but he had gone. I looked back at the boy and, if I not mistaken, I saw the brother, laid with a knife in his back, his face cold and the blood dried as he was gently covered in snow.
That is ok, but it sounds similar to this one:

A Late Night Crash

One afternoon, a couple was traveling on by car when at a far distance they saw a woman in the middle of the road, waving frantically.

The wife told her husband to keep on driving because it might be too dangerous, but the husband decided to pass by slowly so he wouldn't stay with the doubt on his mind of what might have happened and the chances of anyone being hurt. As they got closer, they noticed a woman with cuts and bruises on her face as well as on her arms. They then decide to stop and see if they could be of any help.

The cut and bruised woman was begging for help telling them that she had been in a car accident and that her husband and son, a new born baby, were still inside the car which was in a deep ditch. She told them that the husband was already dead but that her baby seemed to still be alive.

The husband that was traveling decided to get down and try to rescue the baby and he asked the hurt woman to stay with his wife inside the car. When he got down he noticed two people in the front seats of the car but he didn't pay any attention to it and took out the baby quickly and got up to take the baby to its mother. When he got up, he didn't see the mother anywhere so he asked his wife where she had gone. She told him that the woman followed him back to the crashed car.

When the husband went back to look for her, he noticed that clearly the couple in the front seats were dead, one of whom was unmistakeably the woman who had flagged them down.

That is ok, but it sounds similar to this one:

A Late Night Crash

One afternoon, a couple was traveling on by car when at a far distance they saw a woman in the middle of the road, waving frantically.

The wife told her husband to keep on driving because it might be too dangerous, but the husband decided to pass by slowly so he wouldn't stay with the doubt on his mind of what might have happened and the chances of anyone being hurt. As they got closer, they noticed a woman with cuts and bruises on her face as well as on her arms. They then decide to stop and see if they could be of any help.

The cut and bruised woman was begging for help telling them that she had been in a car accident and that her husband and son, a new born baby, were still inside the car which was in a deep ditch. She told them that the husband was already dead but that her baby seemed to still be alive.

The husband that was traveling decided to get down and try to rescue the baby and he asked the hurt woman to stay with his wife inside the car. When he got down he noticed two people in the front seats of the car but he didn't pay any attention to it and took out the baby quickly and got up to take the baby to its mother. When he got up, he didn't see the mother anywhere so he asked his wife where she had gone. She told him that the woman followed him back to the crashed car.

When the husband went back to look for her, he noticed that clearly the couple in the front seats were dead, one of whom was unmistakeably the woman who had flagged them down.
Hoi. You stole
'A mothers love'
Hrmph.


The dark, and thy light.


I woke up with the high taste of blood in my mouth, vodka, and other things. My room was empty, it was strange to me. The floorboards creek, as they drip of damp mold. Thy stairs feel uneven, about to fall. I jump off the stairs and run outside. There I see, the porch bloody. My family is leavin with everything packed. Their faces are white. I stop them from leaving and get in the car. The car smells awful. A song that said in my ear "My love is out in red or blue, missing him from
earth from you-"

  I ask whats going on. No one responds. Not aunt Kari, not uncle Jim and not my little brother Eric. Eric tells me that a monster was in the house, and was purple plis it was japanese. He said it hit me in the mouth. But he said that it killed cousin Sherry on the porch. I laugh as we arrive at the empty city of Columbus. No one was on the street, in stores or in big company buildings. I tell them there is a motel around the corner. We pack up our stuff in the hotel room, 109.

I go outside to the spa and soak in the water. I hear a sound from the janitors room, but I ignore it. Closing my eyes slowly, I get hit by something. Snap boom my eyes open in a dark room. A big giant purple thing is eating the corpse of Cousin Shery. I breathe in gas that makes me want to bite and hurt myself.

I was biting my mouth, and then I get knocked out again. I wake up in a metal sealed room untied. My skin starts turning pink, I notice I dont have any feet... My skin burns in agony I scream as I feel needles and knives under my skin.. It was behid me... killing me. I look at the dead bodies as I prepare to die. The monster ish thing bites the back of my shoulder, and runs a knife underneath. Blood everywhere, he kills me.. A message appears in my head after bein murdered.

"You have been killed thank you for playing Thykino Suy." I wake up locked in the simulator. I sigh with relief. I still feel the pain.

tadah

That was not creepy. It was confusing.

I didn't make it.
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