Should i publish this?

[Danny Boy]

I don't like emo and depressing stories, but for some reason it just sounds like a good story to me.

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[Wynd_Fox]

Not to be "That Guy," but there are numerous errors with punctuation, and the tense changes around a bit. That makes it confusing. There's also no reason to like the main character, she just seems whiny that her mom is a loser.

[Hacker20199]

I find cutting yourself to be pathetic and weak, not sad.

No offence if you're emo <3333

i never cut my self but i almost did once i was dumb to even consider it

[Hacker20199]

^^ thanks for ur opinions i'll fix up the grammar and improve the vocab, then i'll write more

[SkullCandy]

If you ever want to actually PUBLISH PUBLISH something, publish it on the amazon online books thing.

[Hacker20199]

Not to be "That Guy," but there are numerous errors with punctuation, and the tense changes around a bit. That makes it confusing. There's also no reason to like the main character, she just seems whiny that her mom is a loser.

well the story isnt done yet so things could change around

[Meow03]

^^ good job!
lol i have kinda the same kind of story i was gonna write

[Berfie]

I find cutting yourself to be pathetic and weak, not sad.

No offence if you're emo <3333

none takin.

[indyjones]

ew.

[Mega-Bear]

Publish it? Yeah sure, in a magazine column. It sucks in my opinion.

[Hacker20199]

Publish it? Yeah sure, in a magazine column. It sucks in my opinion.

Oh wow thanks, it only took me hours to come up with only that, and it's not done yet i have a few pages now

[Hacker20199]

ew.

how is it ew?

[.::Taboo::.]

Oh boy predictably stuffty teen writing. It's pathetic how people actually find these things worth calling "literature."

[Wizzeh]

There's no way this kid is a teenager taboo. Why did I even come to creativity oh god.

[.::Taboo::.]

my bad predictably stuffty n/a writing.