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Now presenting, from the Block-Knight Publishing Company, the next chapter of an important journey.

We present:
Picture Story - Part 2


Before reading this story be sure to read: Picture Story - Part 1


We'd already lost our two good friends.  Though Beaver Boy and Speedy Onion would live on in our hearts, we felt empty without them.  Nevertheless, we continued on our journey through the barren wasteland.  Few words were spoken between That Bingo and I; we were both deep in thought.




We suddenly both stumbled, as if we'd taken a step down without knowing.  We looked down to see what had happened and to our surprise: the world had ended.. but fortunately a new world started where the other left off.





An enormous structure appeared within the fog.  We were curious enough to ignore our fear; we continued toward the house.





We found a large piece of wood with big enough grooves to climb right up to the top.  Though That Bingo was afraid of heights, he  still managed to climb that wall.





One thing stood between us and getting inside the house.  A window.





Fortunately, we had the brilliant idea of using the hammers which we always carry with us.



We could see small cracks beginning to form in the glass.



Suddenly, the window shattered into thousands of small pieces.



"Hey look, there's a table over there.  I think it's close enough for us to jump to!" That Bingo said.



I was a little more concerned, "Are you sure?"



"Cannonball!!" said That Bingo.  "Ahhhhhh" I said.



"Help!! Help! I'm falling!"  That Bingo grabbed my hands just in time.



Unfortunately, he wasn't that strong.



"OOMF"  



"Heh.. Sorry" he said.  "Don't apologize! Help me get back up!" I said.



"I think I saw a car I could use to get high enough to jump up to the table"



"Umm.. Lance..  You better hurry!!  Come on!"



"AHH! It's no use.. I can't make it." I said.  "You have to make it!"





"Wait.. whats this random cloud of smoke?" said That Bingo



A faint shadow appeared through the smoke.  "Stay back! Stay back I say!" said Bingo.



The figure rushed over, shoved Bingo aside and threw down a rope ladder.





I didn't know who this guy was or what he wanted, but boy did I scamper up that ladder at an amazing speed.





"Follow me if you want to survive"



Bingo and I looked at each other with a puzzled look.  We decided we did indeed want to survive.



"This could be a trap" said Bingo.  "Only one way to find out!" said Lance





"Greetings.  I am Agereon."



"Ohh I've heard of you!  But what are you doing living in a BLUPO castle?" I replied



"Same reasons as you I suppose.. Curiosity.. Survival.."

"Those are good reasons" Said Bingo.



"We have another reason though..  We want to stop this epidemic." I said.



Really?  So you wanna be the heroes then? Well I actually have news for you."



"I know how to get you to where the outbreak started."



"The outbreak started in that tub?" said Bingo



"No, no..  There is a portal in there that will take you to Hollow Heights.  It's the city that was first hit by the epidemic. I escaped the city by finding a portal.  Since I had zombies close on my tail I decided to jump in.  I shot out of the portal inside that Tub, and that's how I got here."



"Well I say we go in. But just how exactly do we get in there?" I said.  Agereon smiled and grabbed Bingo before he had time to react.  He raised him above his head and then threw him right into the tub.



"AHHH" said Bingo



I was more prepared.



"YIPEEEE!!  Thanks Agereon!!  You've been a great help!  We really appreciate you!"



I landed next to Bingo inside the tub.  An ominous black portal stood in front of us.

"Who goes first?" I said

"Nose goes!"  he said



Unfortunately, I wasn't very fast at touching my finger toward my nose.



I jumped in.  





My worries departed when I landed in the portal.  It sent a tickling sensation through your body, but man was it relaxing!

"Jump in, the portal's fine!" I said



Here I go!



As we completely submerged ourselves in the portal, we saw a flash as bright as the sun.



As the suddenness of the flash wore off, we looked around.

We were in Hollow Heights.



END OF PART 2





Credits:

SirLancelot - Cameraman, Writer, Actor, Lead Bot Eventor, Builder, Creator of the Picture Story Idea
That Bingo - Main Actor, Bot Eventor,
Agereon - Best Boy
TheFaustKiller - Actor
Mr.? - Actor
Phillip - Actor
Quattro - Actor
Sgt.Leraku - Small actor (1 picture)
jes00 - The one who nagged me enough to get in done by today.




*If I have forgotten your name in the credits please remind me and you will be added

**Building credits for Hollow Heights will come in Part 3

« Last Edit: July 22, 2011, 02:24:54 PM by SirLancelot7 »

Nice. looking foward to part 3

jes00 - The one who nagged me enough to get in done by today.
Lol. I can't wait till part 3!


You haven't even seen the best part.  That is the ghetto side of town.

Very cool.

So is the city. :o

I built most of the city, Endgame built a large portion of the city, [UA] helped with the city, Phillip built a couple of buildings for the city, TNT built a building for the city.

Those are rough credits for city.  Official credits will be with Part 3.

Love you... nohomo

I can't wait till every part you release. 

Nice looking town you got there.

I like that last picture for some reason.
It has a sort of epic feel to it I guess.

Its a pretty good layout and stuff, but in my opinion, the dialogue could have been better.
It was good up to the Agereon part, then it started getting bad.

But its still good, nice to see someone's making picture stories again, the older ones weren't that good.

Its a pretty good layout and stuff, but in my opinion, the dialogue could have been better.
It was good up to the Agereon part, then it started getting bad.

My thoughts exactly.  I tried multiple times to improve that section but I couldn't improve it.

It was difficult to balance getting the storyline into it while still keeping it entertaining and easy to understand.


In the sixth picture where you and Bingo are looking in the bedroom window, you can see what looks to be a creep bear on the BLUPO table...
lols

In the sixth picture where you and Bingo are looking in the bedroom window, you can see what looks to be a creep bear on the BLUPO table...
lols

c: