Author Topic: Can't sleep, terrified  (Read 4332 times)


it was both dead, AND lifeless?
A small, miniscule dot.

Im 14 aswell. I would not get nightmares and "crap" from that. Sure it would be horrific but I would also call the cops and once it was taken care of I would be fine.
This.
I witnessed a car crash when I was 13. I was mortified when I seen the lifeless body be flung around by the truck. The guy was dead on impact. but by the time I got home, I was playing video games like nothing happened.

However after this, my mom told me to look both ways before crossing the street, or that would happen.


Can we forget about me being pusillanimous individual about the whole situation?
Should I call the police tomorrow or leave it alone?

Can we forget about me being pusillanimous individual about the whole situation?
Should I call the police tomorrow or leave it alone?

Call them now.


Call them now.

Not now, it's the middle of the night.
I was thinking tomorrow.

Did it ever turn to look at you?

Not now, it's the middle of the night.
I was thinking tomorrow.
Even if you call the cops, they'll come by the house anyway. You might as well just tell your parents.

loving man up, he probably just committed Self Delete. Times are pretty rough right now.

Besides, it's not like there's anything you can do.

Wimp.

it was both dead, AND lifeless?


Yeah, ok not exactly william shakespear, I'm just trying to get advice On the whole situation.


If you were a functioning human being you would realize the severity of the situation and tell someone immediately. Instead you go home and try to whore for attention on an online lego forum. Of course that's implying that this is true.


So if this isn't true, I would recommend more detail into your story. Pretty much the only reason I sat here to read it was the word terrified which could bring up something interesting and/or amusing. But overall I think we have a talented writer here.

Also, simple grammatical mistakes need to be corrected and take the time to type out your numbers. Doing this, especially the second suggestion, makes stories much more enjoyable.
« Last Edit: August 04, 2011, 03:00:01 AM by Thar »

The hell? Of course you should call the loving police. What are you thinking? You should have called them the instant you found it... if you actually did find it.