The request was fine.
It really, really wasn't, but that's not the point.
"Should be" should be italicized to emphasize it not quoted.
"Capiable" isn't a word
"Hilarious" is an adjective and cannot modify the adjective "stuffty", you need the adverb form "hilariously"
Hehehehe
You missed "forign," "acknolowges," and "english." The last being the least offensive, since it's just a capitalization error.