I was going to troll this but I love ALL of this roleplay minus Kochieboy's. *I charge forward with my arms turning into spikes oh my god* "What is this ?" *I'm making my actions totally proper woo*
negatory
example give
I sighed as I walked along the beach, nearing the camp from my jog along the island. My head shot up when I noticed the campfire was out. I broke into a run and saw - to my horror - that everyone had been slaughtered. 'N-no.. why?!' I looked from side to side. 'Katie?! KAATIE!?' Where was she?!
theres example
pls improve
your *I charge forward and eat his snake* makes me cringe
and another thing
MAGIC?
no
just
no.