Not gallery worthy. At all. It has little to nothing to it, and the design is bland. Even if it's copying a real lego set type build, it would have to be more unique to make it to the forums.
What the hell
who are you to just say "Oh you can't post in gallery, it's not worthy and it's bad"?
I haven't made the interior yet, But so far I think its good.
and see:
Try to recognize that we all have different skill levels in this game. There is no need to criticize someone else's build simply because it's not the best build out there.
But anyway, Hell I think it looks good so far compared to the actual picture I'm looking at right now. I'd say you should also extend the baseplate to the right a bit and add the bus stop as well as the other things not related to the actual pizza place itself (if you aren't planning on doing it already)
You're gettin there! Keep it up