Intro made in Cinema 4D for Muzzles56

[Skateaton]

Version 1
Version 2
Version 3

Its nothing extremely good and its nothing bad, but this is my first time using this program and just wanted to know how I did, Muzzles wanted an Intro for his videos done by me, so I gave him this.
I just wanted to see how well I did on it.

So how did I do? First time using any modeling program ever here yo.

Version 3 is much better, IMO.
Cinema 4D decided to work with me this time.

[Ad Bot]

[Frontrox]

That was okay, the music was nice.

[Skateaton]

That was okay, the music was nice.

yay :D

[Regulith]

My eye is immediately drawn to the sparkly bit at the top instead of the name, and I end up following that instead of actually reading the text. Might want to fix that somehow.

[Masterlegodude]

Put the glow above the I maybe? Also, the shorter the intro, the better, people don't like long intros

[lordician]

Put the glow above the I maybe? Also, the shorter the intro, the better, people don't like long intros

Since Muzzles only posts short random video's, this would be the best. ;D

[Supreme Guy]

It's... Boring. Nothing really special or interesting. It's a bit bland is all.
>text
>moving camera
>dubstep
>end

I'm not saying you should make it longer, it's just unimaginative is all. Heck, the thing'd be cooler if you just made the camera orbit around the name a bit and do a static-camera effect to focus on it directly.

[Muzzles56]

My idea was completely different lol
I wanted a naughty bear execution and shizzle

[asablief]

why do you use dubstep for everything

it never fits

[Freeze]

it needs more Irish
http://vimeo.com/28259074

[Muzzles56]

it needs more Irish
http://vimeo.com/28259074

Lolwhat

[Skateaton]

why do you use dubstep for everything

it never fits

Becuz it r best

Lolwhat

It's... Boring. Nothing really special or interesting. It's a bit bland is all.
>text
>moving camera
>dubstep
>end

I'm not saying you should make it longer, it's just unimaginative is all. Heck, the thing'd be cooler if you just made the camera orbit around the name a bit and do a static-camera effect to focus on it directly.

Cinema 4D derped when I tried to do any of that.
I got a second idea I'll try today and see how that comes up.

[Skateaton]

Version 3

Cinema 4D decided to work with me this time around.

[Regulith]

Version 3

Cinema 4D decided to work with me this time around.

This is much better

The movement could be more fluid, but it's a good start

Suggestion: Have a slightly dimmer sparkly bit in the center instead (assuming Muzzles didn't specify otherwise)

[Fredulus]

version 3 is much much better