Author Topic: [TmFd] TimeAir- Flight TA 0001 [Updated]  (Read 4776 times)

loving god damn MOTHERloving iPod had to loving run out of loving power just as I was loving hitting the loving post loving bu loving tt loving on.

I had said a lot of stuff about your awesome plane and now I have to redo it all

Looks generally good. Here's some stuff to work on.

Wings-engines could use work.  Using the jvs fan would be helpful.  They are too high up on the fuselage, tops gotta be flush or lower than floor of area.

Wheels-got the pattern for the wheels reversed.  It's not

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 The Os are wheels.  Also, all eight wheels are on a single hydrolic lift system, not four.  Using the wheel prop Wouk solve the wheels' flatness.

The tail is too small.  Make it larger, add a rudder, and taper the end to a dulled point instead of a smoothed cylinder.

The windshield is too narrow, make it wider vertically.

Im also noticing now that your passenger windows are small and single 'ply'.  In a normal airplane, the windows are doubled up for max safety.  An easy fix, just add the same kin of window to that block you have infront of the window.

Idk if you did or not, but add spoilers, slats, ailerons, and rudders.  I also hope you didnt forget to put the outside lights that blink in the night.

My previously attempted post was much better and more descriptive.

loving god damn MOTHERloving iPod had to loving run out of loving power just as I was loving hitting the loving post loving bu loving tt loving on.

I had said a lot of stuff about your awesome plane and now I have to redo it all

Looks generally good. Here's some stuff to work on.
Thank you
Wings-engines could use work.  Using the jvs fan would be helpful.  They are too high up on the fuselage, tops gotta be flush or lower than floor of area.
I know that, I'll be doing that soon
Wheels-got the pattern for the wheels reversed.  It's not

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it's

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 The Os are wheels.  Also, all eight wheels are on a single hydrolic lift system, not four.  Using the wheel prop Wouk solve the wheels' flatness.
I'm not gonna stuff around with the wheels anymore its extremely difficult to have to change them... and I don't want to use props
The tail is too small.  Make it larger, add a rudder, and taper the end to a dulled point instead of a smoothed cylinder.
Uh huh, I was going to add small wings on either side of the tail.
The windshield is too narrow, make it wider vertically.
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Im also noticing now that your passenger windows are small and single 'ply'.  In a normal airplane, the windows are doubled up for max safety.  An easy fix, just add the same kin of window to that block you have infront of the window.
Yeah I hadn't thought of that, and i need to add safety lights on the floor because of safety regulations :P
Idk if you did or not, but add spoilers, slats, ailerons, and rudders.  I also hope you didnt forget to put the outside lights that blink in the night.

My previously attempted post was much better and more descriptive.
I've added flaps or whatever they use to slow down, they aren't visible in pictures but when you use a lever they appear.

Anyway Thanks for for all the constructive critCIAm :D

Yes definitely add the horizontal stabilizers to the tail (the small wings on the side of the tail). Plane's cannot fly without them.

Thank youI know that, I'll be doing that soonI'm not gonna stuff around with the wheels anymore its extremely difficult to have to change them... and I don't want to use props

It shouldnt be too difficult, just make a tower of bricks connecting the plane to the grou and replace the wheels.

Nice. 10/10.  good build, and decals

Wow! 10/10! I'm surprised!

Front of plane looks like boat.

o i c wat u did thar
and also... dat pilot aint nu pilot - he a terorizt
(lol spall fails)

And you can't spell, and I'm not a terrorist!

-infamous bump-
TimeAir has listened to public opinions and has increased tail size and wing things on tail, and has changed the 4 small engines into 2 bigger engines.
Also, not in the pictures, added some more levers and red switches which do nothing into the roosterpit and added emergency path lighting.




looks much better now.

but now at the new angles, it doesnt look like the wings are long enough, and four engines might be a bit better for the size of your plane