That was pretty great.
Some of the camera angles were just perfect, like the rotation around the intersection for one. The builds were pretty solid too, apart from the way you could see where it ended... even in the desert you wouldn't get a random cluster of highrise like that so it looked a tad awkward in any scenes that revealed the border, though maybe I am just overthinking it.
Voice acting was good, story was pretty great except [spoiler] I felt the part where that leader guy turned on them and revealed he was working for the terrorists... I don't think that really did much for the story, nor made much sense. It sort of felt like you just wanted to add a twist and that you just stuck one in for the sake of it. So I guess that part didn't really feel clever or witty, or have that shock factor you generally aim for when doing something like that.[/spoiler end] But that little aspect isn't enough to ruin the video for me, I enjoyed it.
9/10