Author Topic: Creative writing  (Read 1335 times)

I don't write very often and I don't really consider myself very good at it but I'm quite happy with this bit so I thought I'd share it.

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I strode briskly across the grey paving (as quickly as I could while a layer of snow gathered on the soles of my shoes). I staggered along the whitened road with my face down and shrouded by the high collar of my grey coat. I felt the bitter cold prick at my fingers. After clenching then stretching them (a pointless attempt to warm them without lifting my hands from my sides), I vigorously rubbed them and stuffed them into my empty pockets. Every breath made a hazy wisp pass my lips. It’s that time of year again.

The soft crunchy-thud noise you get with every footstep imprinted on snow was the only sound to reach my ears. There was always something eerie about the way the heavy snow seemed to muffle the noise of the moving world like a murderer might gag their victim.

What a wonderful thought...

I walked silently, I had trudged this way so many times that it required no thought. I began listening for something to focus on while I plodded clumsily through the snow; there was nothing, no single sound to contemplate, simply silence. The silence was ghostly, uncanny to say the least, in a city like this. The rhythmic footsteps were no longer heard, not a noise escaped the houses, or maybe the snow has silenced that too.  After many years, I still have yet to grow used to it. How can someone grow used to that feeling that the bustling city, the grinding gear, the ever-moving people, had come, to a halt.

I stood at a door. It was broken and tattered, the whole house looked forsaken. It was home. Red paint flaked away from the wooden door, the handle hung loosely.  Although the lock was broken, no one ever came in. Perhaps they saw nothing worth taking.

I gingerly closed the frail door behind me. As I contemplated removing my coat, a persuasive draft seeped through the cracks of the windows and doors with a rather cold, swaying argument.

“All right then.” I muttered to the empty house.

Having nothing to do, I perched myself on my windowsill and gazed outwards, aimlessly at the monotonous cityscape, now painted white.



That was awesome.
Call it something like "Homeless" or "Cold" or something stupid like that.
That was worth reading twice though.

That was awesome.
Call it something like "Homeless" or "Cold" or something stupid like that.
That was worth reading twice though.

Thanks!


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Brent stumbled through the woods, hot on the trail of a wounded bear. Not slowing, he jammed the lead ball and gun powder packet down the barrel of his rifle. Then, stopping for only a moment, fired toward the beast, missing. Glancing down to the machete at his hip, he shook his head, fighting the bear head-on was a bad idea, even if he was wounded. No matter, he wouldn’t be coming back. Turning to walk back to Stone-hill, he noticed something glimmering from the corner of his eye.
A piece of broken glass shimmered on the ground in front of a half-buried log cabin that was covered in moss. He had to stoop to get in through the door. Inside the house was empty, save for a wooden chest that had to have been hewn before the nations went mad.
Carefully opening it, he found a ragged cloth, some papers rendered unreadable from years of weathering, and, at the very bottom, a plastic case holding a large black circular disk with a hole in the center. The Trade-Itinerant were near-by, maybe they would be interested in purchasing such an item in exchange for fuel.

I'll write up something tommorow. I'm not the best but... :/

i'll dig out my flashdrive and post my latest shortly

The luscious evanescent man lavishly strided across the stony translucent floor towards the dark cold obsidion void-like wall where-

seriously guys, you don't need to write like this. One adjective is fine to describe something, maybe two, maybe even three if you're feeling adventurous, but please, four is pushing the envelope, especially in the same sentence.

for some reason people always try to make up for the complete lack of length and actual plot with walls and walls of adjective.
"but taboob, it's arrtttt!!" yeah and you're stupid. maybe one or two adjectives is really necessary to create a good picture. if you need anymore, you're handicapped and have no imagination.

My problem was that I could never fatten up my writing enough for the plot to cover any length. I mostly do poetry now.

I did this one for school and my teachers insist that we use as many adjectives as possible or assume we have a crappy vocabulary.

I did this one for school and my teachers insist that we use as many adjectives as possible or assume we have a crappy vocabulary.

FOOLISH MORTALS

The Void

The Caretaker: The lighthouse blinked systematically, never losing its soothing inaudible metronome. As I traversed up the spiral of stairs, dust avalanches fell, particle by particle. Being her caretaker was being the heart of this town, a small town with nothing but ever changing void beyond it. Every day I ask myself how I got here, where we are, what happened...

The Tenant: The Void. That's what people call it, the Void. The very thought of it transitions this environment into an eerie, ominous wasteland. That's why I try to be optimistic, waking up every morning with a smile on my face. That smile couldn't have been more fake. I want to know what's in that Void, maybe there will be a better place...

The Curious: They say curiosity killed the cat, well I don't know about a cat but I know for damn sure it killed my brother. I never should have told him about the Void, he was a young lad...he could have had a future. A job tending the grass or something. But no, he decides to simply jump off those rugged cliffs into the murky abyss known as the Void. I never heard a scream, not a peep. I simply woke up to find a note with a picture of cliffs and an arrow pointing down...

The Void: Jeffrey cleaned his room, stubbornly creating a makeshift "bed". Doing so, he hit his elbow hard on a transparent snowglobe. Angry, he tossed the globe across the room; the lighthouse inside the globe covered with specs of "snow". He thought he heard a faint scream, shrugged, and simply went back to his chores.

The layout of that is eerily similar to something I've been working on for English class.

But I love the idea of that story.

Only complaint was that it could have been a bit longer, more descriptive in a few places.

The layout of that is eerily similar to something I've been working on for English class.

But I love the idea of that story.

Only complaint was that it could have been a bit longer, more descriptive in a few places.
Thanks :]

Yeah, I didn't put too much effort into it. I just saw an old snowglobe with a lighthouse n stuff in my room, and decided to make a story :P