Creative writing

[Black and White]

If I'd been born just ten years earlier I'd be twenty-six and all my friends I've ever known I wouldn't even know cause they'd just be kids and and all these things I've done and where I've been and gone I'd never know cause they'd be to late and all these things I've written here I'd have never wrote cause if I'd been born just ten years earlier I'd be thirty-six...

just a random thought I had one day :/

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[Black and White]

edit: Dribble toast cause I'm tired


This is the results of the first time I tried my hand at writing some kind of ballad wrote it a couple months ago

The Dragon, The Dwarf, and The Blade Master.

The dragon came with might and flame to crumble the ancient dwarven halls.

Halls of riches, gold, and gems, that dwarves hath hidden from mortal men.

The dwarves they stood to protect they're pride and in the end they all had died.

All but Gelan son of Dhelian brother to Elraen heir to the kingdom of Gelandria.

Who tripped and hit his head in battle, the dragon thinking him dead had gone to gather his spoils and guard his hoard.

But Gelan followed and hid inside the dragons lair and waited upon a chance to strike  the dragon down and save the dwarven town

But the dragon spied him and sought to kill him hence I strode out to stop the beast, I the Blade Master.  

Unlimited blades I call forth to slay the dragon and save the dwarf.

Fin

I know twards the end it gets filled with cheese and kinda sucks :/

inb4someonegetsthelastlinesre ference

[Katadeus]

Lol@Gelan. He funny.

[Pengie]

In unrelated news thanks to the piece I posted here I have to go to Gifted and Talented sessions.

Well forget.

[jookbox :D]

The luscious evanescent man lavishly strided across the stony translucent floor towards the dark cold obsidion void-like wall where-

seriously guys, you don't need to write like this. One adjective is fine to describe something, maybe two, maybe even three if you're feeling adventurous, but please, four is pushing the envelope, especially in the same sentence.

Go away. I thought it was fine and while reading it I actually felt like I was there.

I don't see many good authors any more, perhaps this dude could be the next one.

And forget you cucumber, I was going to use "The void" as the title of one of my books >:C

[Cucumber!]

And forget you cucumber, I was going to use "The void" as the title of one of my books >:C

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