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Who do you think will die next?

Angela
0 (0%)
Jared/Deraj
0 (0%)
Shanny
0 (0%)
Izzy
1 (25%)
Emily
0 (0%)
Ella
0 (0%)
Angel
0 (0%)
John
0 (0%)
Derek
0 (0%)
Tristen
1 (25%)
Se'an
0 (0%)
Marissa
0 (0%)
Philip
2 (50%)

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Author Topic: [RPWS] Stories- Zombies!: Book 1A  (Read 4617 times)

jaradderaj

November 16, 2011, 11:38:43 PM
Quote from: Mega-Bear on November 16, 2011, 08:10:01 PM
Good for a start, I'd recommend just turning it into a fifteen page long or so short story. I think it would allow you to tell the story while still writing as much as you can.
Ya This thing will keep beging updated each day hopefully.. Also I will have a Side b to the story where you get to see it from Team B's point of View LOL

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Reshiram

November 19, 2011, 01:49:04 AM
Quote from: jookbox :D on November 16, 2011, 03:43:28 PM
I saw many spelling errors too. and sentances that didn't make sense worth stuff.


Seems like it was written by a tenyearold. I don't think everyone keeps weapons in their rooms. Nor does anyone actually say OMG.
Oh the irony!

SmeggHead69

November 19, 2011, 02:11:09 PM
Quote from: jaradderaj on November 16, 2011, 11:38:43 PM
Ya This thing will keep beging updated each day hopefully.. Also I will have a Side b to the story where you get to see it from Team B's point of View LOL
oh stuff, lol.

jaradderaj

November 20, 2011, 02:50:41 AM
Quote from: SmeggHead69 on November 19, 2011, 02:11:09 PM
oh stuff, lol.
Either through shanny's eyes or Emily

Reshiram

November 20, 2011, 03:15:43 AM
Quote from: jaradderaj on November 20, 2011, 02:50:41 AM
Either through shanny's eyes or Emily
I could write it if it's through Emily's view.

jaradderaj

November 23, 2011, 12:40:41 AM
Quote from: Reshiram on November 20, 2011, 03:15:43 AM
I could write it if it's through Emily's view.

MAYBE if you acually finish your own story first

Trogtor

November 23, 2011, 12:43:21 AM
Jared, 3 words


WRITE A BOOK!!!!

These stories are pretty cool

jaradderaj

November 23, 2011, 12:54:32 AM
Quote from: Trogtor on November 23, 2011, 12:43:21 AM
Jared, 3 words


WRITE A BOOK!!!!

These stories are pretty cool
LOL I think it is funny how people use my real name to address me... That or they use my Rp name...

Trogtor

November 23, 2011, 12:57:34 AM
lol dont call me paul, that is just akward to me

jaradderaj

November 23, 2011, 12:59:30 AM
Quote from: Trogtor on November 23, 2011, 12:57:34 AM
lol dont call me paul, that is just akward to me
U just di- Nevermind....

Reshiram

November 23, 2011, 01:02:03 AM
Quote from: Trogtor on November 23, 2011, 12:57:34 AM
lol dont call me paul, that is just akward to me
Paul is a great name to me.  :cookieMonster:

Quote from: jaradderaj on November 23, 2011, 12:54:32 AM
LOL I think it is funny how people use my real name to address me... That or they use my Rp name...
I see no reason not to.

jaradderaj

November 23, 2011, 01:08:25 AM
Jared:I am Jared the... um... forget... um... THE THE!! THE!!! RPER!!!! YAAAAA
Deraj:Your a handicap Jared...
Jared:Shut up other me
Real Jared:They are fighting again.....
« Last Edit: December 01, 2011, 12:38:44 AM by jaradderaj »

Trogtor

November 23, 2011, 01:09:47 AM
I'm paul the apostle!!!!!!!

jaradderaj

November 23, 2011, 01:10:03 AM

SmeggHead69

November 25, 2011, 06:08:30 PM
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