[Lunar]

 

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[TeslaCoil]

OGM I THOUGT IT WAS GOING TO BE AN ANIME ELF

Excellent work, just give the poor Elf some eyes.

[carolcat]

OGM I THOUGT IT WAS GOING TO BE AN ANIME ELF

Excellent work, just give the poor Elf some eyes.

He's wearing glasses, but I'd think that at least a vague outline of eyes would be suitable.
Unless he fell asleep in the job, then I'd guess it's ok.

[Lunar]

 

[carolcat]

I spend a few hours trying to do the eyes, but failed. I tried to make it look like he had his eyes shut, but I don't think it worked. XD

Maybe a faint little dark line for eyelashes or something might work.

[Lunar]

 

[Extrude]

Needs more shading, proportions, and eyes.

[Katadeus]

Kinda what Extrude said, except a little more specific. The socket area for the eyes could use a little more shading to show that there are actually eyes in there, but not necessarily any more specific lines. Proportions are just fine except for a couple little things; his right ear, and his right arm. They stick out in a way that's not really physically possible. Shading, I'm actually fine with except for on the eyes (and possibly on the hat).
Oh, and his neck looks a little fat.

Overall, those are little tiny nitpicky things and are not too important. Nice work!