Author Topic: Some one wanna right a poem for me;)))- NEON I PICK YOU!  (Read 3272 times)

SpreadsPlague you aren't very nice.

what else is new

Free verse meaning it doesn't have to rhyme
here I go:

O, great lakes
Bodies of water, glistening bright
Goes to depths I cannot perceive
Truly a magnificent sight
I wish I could come more

O, great lakes
Natural beauty, great waves
Fish for everyone, oh how I love
Bringing families together once more
I wish I could come more

O, great lakes
The life you give, nessecity
Everyone needs you, I need you
Loving the world, and loving me
I wish I could come more

When I come more, I sense the serenity
When I come more, I appreciate life
When I come more, Life is simple
I must make an effort
I shall come more

D for does not have flow

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PMing you it.
« Last Edit: December 13, 2011, 06:06:52 PM by Unwritten Calender »

Sec, googling.
Straight off the top brotherh


Also it doesn't have to be free verse?
:(
what else is new

D for does not have flow
Wow gayest teacher ever!

A smell lurking around
A pleasant odor abound
The bitter taste of a drink
It might even look like ink

Silence fills the room
The coffee has a bloom
Day by day, night by night,
Customers fill in and act polite

How's this so far?

D for dude why would you compare a coffee to ink

aye yo, pm please i dunt want my teacher googling my poem. LOL It's happend....

Also keep them comming I'm going out to record music and finish the media part.

Wow gayest teacher ever!

revised your grade - C for cheesiest ending ever

aye yo, pm please i dunt want my teacher googling my poem. LOL It's happend....

Also keep them comming I'm going out to record music and finish the media part.

maybe you should do your own work you lazy forget

you know plagiarism can get you expelled in some schools?

Okay, I'll give it a whirl.
BUT IT NEEDS TO loving RHYME.


A bright and shining sea, aglow with the sun's resplendence,
wonderfully gleaming beneath the skies.
Sunlit water's mysteries abound,
capt'ring the hearts of both meek and wise.

I oft wonder why the sea, it always seems
to capture my imagination ev'ry time
while below the mighty waves and ships
fish travel through the ocean's sand and the slime.

I sit by the beach in awe
of what the tides will next bring.
It appears as though its never changing,
be it winter, fall, or spring.

I sadly must leave the mist and foam,
lest I be here all my days.
But the marvels of the sea always draw me,
in its power and infallible ways.




Don't be too hard on me, I rarely write for other people and hate when people look at my creations. I hope this suits your purposes.

Game please.

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Fack.

-Cleared for anti-google-
« Last Edit: December 13, 2011, 06:13:28 PM by Neon »

aye yo, pm please i dunt want my teacher googling my poem. LOL It's happend....

maybe you should just do your loving homework instead

You can't use any poem here anyway.

Teachers google a lot of students stuff now-a-days, it would lead right back to here.


Wow, bitch.


I'm only doing this cuz I want a game. I hate people reading my work ;_;

revised your grade - C for cheesiest ending ever
You bout to get an A
ASSWHIPPIN


Now, if you excuse me, I just got Pokemon Diamond and I'd rather be out of the presence of a creativity-stealing assforget.

Good day.