[RPWS] Stories: Knife Training

[Tom Gunn]

Nice triple post.

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[Dippindots]

If you don't want us to go out of the way with our imagination then give us some description.

[FailWhale]

Thanks, Tom. And, Dippindots, I am currently adding more detail to the story because I wasn't happy at all with the way it turned out either. Hopefully, I'll finish the revised story soon and send it to Jared, and hopefully people won't hate it as much as the original. Then again, people usually hate my writing anyway, so I have no idea how it's going to turn out. :D

[SmeggHead69]

Thanks, Tom. And, Dippindots, I am currently adding more detail to the story because I wasn't happy at all with the way it turned out either. Hopefully, I'll finish the revised story soon and send it to Jared, and hopefully people won't hate it as much as the original. Then again, people usually hate my writing anyway, so I have no idea how it's going to turn out. :D

i am one of them who hates your writing, well. your story plot.

[.::Taboo::.]

frankly, every bit of this whatever-the-forget-it-is (not at all a series) seems terrible.
i really do need to post the updates to my novels. there's not that much new stuff because i type randomly when i have free time and nothing else to do (only 200 or so pages left from the draft to type, woo hoo!) but nonetheless.

[Derroith]

It's really boring and it seems almost as if it's not going anywhere, and the "like a boss" stuff just ruins every moment. Really dumb too, like ninja clouds or whatever the forget they were?

[FailWhale]

Well, I got the story plot from Jared, so if you have a problem with it, take it up with him. Fudge's character is obsessed with being a boss which is why he takes every opportunity to comment about things being "boss-like". He's supposed to ruin every moment. And the ninja cloud was a side comment that Jared made when I was talking to him and I was too lazy to think of anything else. Also, I was, at this point, not even caring about making this story interesting because Jared was basically on my ass every single day about it, so yeah. But that's not an excuse, that's just a pretext, so, by all means, blame me for this piece of stuff that I called Knife Training.