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The only problem I have with it is that it basically repeats itself, repeats itself, repeats itself. Just add a bit more detail like a computer or something(lol). As someone said earlyer in the comments, "Add some rooms or something" Or something that resembles that. I think that you should really start from this than expand, add rooms, so on and so forth.