Author Topic: Truck  (Read 2004 times)

A simple cargo truck I built a few weeks ago for Ostinyo. I like how it turned out. Rate if you want.




Nice.
I like your use of buttons.
8/10

It is okay but the buttons that I am guessing are supposed to be lights do need to be changed to actual bricks. The truck itself looks like it is levitating off the ground, try to make it somewhat even with the front bumper by adding 2 flats onto it. The huge blocky mirrors could be changed to something a little smaller and the back is very bland. Try adding onto it by putting something that look like a trailer hitch.

Set aside that it is okay for a simple cargo truck. 5-6/10

Thanks. You are right about the back being bland and the truck sort of levitating. I didn't hitch anything because I was making it for Ostinyo's map and wasn't sure what he wanted to add. 

Thanks. You are right about the back being bland and the truck sort of levitating. I didn't hitch anything because I was making it for Ostinyo's map and wasn't sure what he wanted to add. 

Oh I wasn't saying to add a trailer to the back. What I was trying to say is add the hook that the trailer would slide in to.

I do agree with Nom (Above in comments). He is very correct that the back is a little bland. I recommend, as he has already done so that you should add a hook/trailer hitch for the truck as well as a box or something (resort to google images to correct my ignorance of truck hitches) None the less the only other problem I have with the truck is that its kinda color bland. Add a few other colors to it considering the fact that its just gray. Anyway over all, I'd give it an 7.2. With the information that its a simple, possible Dm vehicle. As the people have said, make these small corrections and you have a Nice truck. Good work.

I think as an update, you should make the flatbed of the truck a tad more flat. Maybe throw on a full brick and some studs, trucks in real life usually don't stand that high up off of the ground.

8/10

Thanks guys. I was getting bored when I got to the back so I just rushed and it came out a bit bland. Will take use this advice later on though.

Also, it was painted gray so that it could be easily modified later on.
« Last Edit: January 04, 2012, 02:16:17 AM by Count »




what's the build in the background? It looks amazing! 10/10

what's the build in the background? It looks amazing! 10/10
It's from Ostinyo's battlefield 3 map which he was working on.