Author Topic: Kino Der Toten  (Read 3810 times)

Incoming Constructive Criticism-
I understand this is a WIP, but here's my take on it.
1. Use larger bricks instead of smaller ones.
It looks nicer, and it doesn't take up the brick count.
For example the walls are made out of 1x4x5, when you could use a 1x12x5 or if you get all of demians bricks(demians brick packs, 1 2 and 3 on RTB) 1x32x5, etc.
Basically, use one brick for 2.

2. add some elevation variation for ceilings.
The roof to the stage looks too flat, try to add some design and decor to the roof and the surrounding area.
It may take a while, but in the end, it would be worth it.

3. Try not to stick with one shade of color
It looks like you are using the default colorset, which has 1 shade of brown to it.
Try downloading truneo's colorset on RTB to add more variation to it, so it won't look so bland.

Can't really say much else except that you should go around in the gallery and just look around at other people's builds, see how they work their stuff out, etc.
It's a good way to improve, so when you build, you know how it's going to go down.
thx for the tips and im use ing the 2 x 4 x 5 because the zombies are zapt

thx for the tips and im use ing the 2 x 4 x 5 because the zombies are zapt
even if it's ZAPT, the zombies in kino der toten only break down the barriers, not the entire walls.
Also, they tend to come from the roof too.

I don't like it, but I don't think it's bad. I think you have the potential of becoming a good builder.

even if it's ZAPT, the zombies in kino der toten only break down the barriers, not the entire walls.
Also, they tend to come from the roof too.
yes but ZAPT will brake bricks thin and small ones the only ones that they wont break is 2x?x5

your pretty bad now leave if you would

"He dislikes my build, which means he's an overall piece of stuff! I'm gonna use a bad comeback and tell him to leave my thread!"

Well... honesty... its pretty terrible :/

I could see improvement, but atm, it's pretty bad. Needs a lot of improvement.

yes but ZAPT will brake bricks thin and small ones the only ones that they wont break is 2x?x5
ok, use those as an outer barrier to block in teh zombies, and make an interior that is more detailed.

problem solved

yes but ZAPT will brake bricks thin and small ones the only ones that they wont break is 2x?x5
Well turn off brick damage, event the bricks you want broken to be destroyed on zombie touch(if that's actually in there)

Well turn off brick damage, event the bricks you want broken to be destroyed on zombie touch(if that's actually in there)
i have tried that and it dosnt work :c


It just seems like Iv'e seen this 10,000 times before.  Like way too much brown and few to no furniture I was hoping for some detail such as the viewing decks or screening rooms.  I mean you could even event the teleporter and dogs, just seems so.... original.  But I really hate to be the douche who says he dislikes it but I see you have potential and you can always edit so go effort.

your pretty bad now leave if you would

ouch.......
you forgetin owned him