House On a Hill - My first house!

[popman98]

I don't believe that's a first build! very good job!

It says nowhere it's his first build.
It says it's his first house.

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[Incinerate]

The roof shouldn't end where the wall does. It should point out a bit.
The whole roof formation also seem strange, but oh well.

Is it just me, or isn't the first pic of the wall of the house too empty? Lacks windows on the second floor I guess.

I find the color choices disturbing.
The red carpet, the blue carpet, the blue walls in the bathroom and I seriously think chess patterns is always a bad choice.
Use more white and less sharp colors for the bathroom. Maybe use a bit wood too, as it fits the theme.

I also suggest that beams may be a good addition. This does not fit everywhere, but I just want to make sure for you that they're available.


I see that you're great with cubescaping. You make it very smooth and lively.
But, I assure you that you have still much to go.
My nemesis when I make cubescapes is repetition. It looks stuff and I get mad when I see someone else do it.

Here's and example of a repeated part. You see.. it looks like stairs.




All in all, a nice hoos. 7/10

The server is also great.

Thanks for the tips.  I will take them into consideration.

[Wayne]

I love it all except for the colors, sorry.

Great job for a first :)

[blocklandiansprofile]

I absolutely love this build, Excellent work.

[otto-san]

That'd be good for a seventh house, an eighth, even.


neat

[popman98]

I played this on the hide n' seek server.
I got to say the trees are loving beautiful.

Still, the roof is really weird and should be changed to something more normal.

[TheArmyGuy]

The house is very neat looking in the grand picture, but the details lack. Especially in the exterior. The roof is odd, particulary on the edges.
The underwater grass is a major turnoff, and the walls are a bit bland. Also, the staircase isn't steep enough, so it esentially takes up the entire center of the house.
But all in all, it's a fine first.

[MitchTheMayor.]

Realy? Your first house? Liar.

[Corbiere]

Realy? Your first house? Liar.

First house, not first build.

Surprising as it may seem, the first thing people build on this game isn't necessarily a house.

Neat :)

[SailorMan]

I like it, but why is there a moat around the house?
Hell, why not.

[Kevin]

I think the colors are fine, but as far as how they are in real houses they could be tweaked.

Great work otherwise, I have always had a hard time building things from IRL so this is fantastic work.


The terrain really adds to it as well.

[carolcat]

The exterior of the house looks a little bland in my opinion. Other than that, it's nice for a first house.

[Radioactive]

Neat

[nixton]

Wow... Can't believe this is the first house you've ever built... 9/10.

OFF TOPIC: How did you make those kind of brick textures?

[Freek]

I like it. Very nice.