Hey, I made something for school

[rockslide26]

http://youtu.be/H1BYn3KqHls

Can I have some constructive criticism on this? I had a sore throat while recording my voice, so everything had to be muted except my voice, and it's still kinda difficult to hear. What do you think of this?

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[Kumquat]

Pretty good.

[Nymethus]

Damn.

national socialist is pronounced with a t, BTW

[rockslide26]

Damn.

national socialist is pronounced with a t, BTW

I know, my voice is handicapped because I'm sick :c

Pretty good.

Thanks!

[Nymethus]

I know, my voice is handicapped because I'm sick :c

is baby sick

[rockslide26]

is baby sick

Roses are red
Violets are red
I killed everyone at the tea party

[Nymethus]

You apply to different literary agencies however they don't like your writing style or subject.

[rockslide26]

You apply to different literary agencies however they don't like your writing style or subject.

But I am a horse, they must like my style and subject. Everyone loves barnyard animals!

[Nymethus]

But I am a horse, they must like my style and subject. Everyone loves barnyard animals!

Bitch I'm a Clydesdale

[rockslide26]

Bitch I'm a Clydesdale

Dammit, I'm a Pinto

[Nymethus]

Dammit, I'm a Pinto

maybe you haven't seen a Clydesdale

[Daedalus]

[Nymethus]

http://pigroll.com/img/hurr_im_a_hoers.jpg

[Daedalus]

"hurr im a questin merk"

[Nymethus]

"hurr im a questin merk"

WRONG that is not a Clydesdale