Hey guys,
You might have seen me posting up poems and such, well tonight I have started writing what I think is my best.
Still a WIP
The Passing of Old King Moore
A cool, soft wind did blow across the lands of Castle Moore.
Over a land, untouched by the hands of war.
With a town, with craftsmen world renown.
Great heroes of old myth and lore
can only be found in the lands of Castle Moore.
Celebrations would be held for lovers wed and babies born,
yet today the people could only mourn.
The queen and the priests could only watch
the last few sighs caused by his great sore,
and then the pass of the great king Moore.
People I showed to tonight have said that it is good.
But please give me advice and your opinions!
/howismywork?
