9/10
The Fraps logo is annoying. You need to sort that out, but you are already aware of this so I won't hang on that.
I really liked it.
3:40 was perhaps a bit long, but you kept my attention. I loved the approach you had to not using voicing. You had a 'silent film' style going on there. You used music really well, in a way that helped tell the story and reveal the characters feelings.
The video had a silliness and a cuteness to it. The melodrama part where he is sitting on the couch made me laugh a lot.
You have a clear style that is very likeable. Its better than Squideey's to me, I've always found his videos to have a sort of... "douchiness" about them.
Its a spongebob soundtrack
"Of Love and Destiny"
Looks like you monetized your video, I hope you have permission for all of the music for commercial usage.