Author Topic: My tutorial (Read 849 times)

MARBLE MAN · May 19, 2012, 04:07:55 PM

I built and evented this in about 3 hours, it has lights and whatnot
You can edit it and make it better, just give me some credit...

I guess this is an entry to the Tutorial brick contest :P
Linky:
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Pic is attached

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Fracture · May 19, 2012, 04:09:12 PM

Greatest build in Blockland, ever.
10/10

MARBLE MAN · May 19, 2012, 04:15:55 PM

Quote from: Fracture on May 19, 2012, 04:09:12 PM

10/10

you might get banned for that ....
I suggest editing now

Mega-Bear · May 19, 2012, 04:16:16 PM

Could use more pictures.

MARBLE MAN · May 19, 2012, 04:19:02 PM

Quote from: Mega-Bear on May 19, 2012, 04:16:16 PM

Could use more pictures.

ok- Ill take some

Corbiere · May 20, 2012, 09:14:35 AM

This really isn't bad. Good work.

There are a few little things though:

- The SWIM room makes no sense. Why water blocks in the middle of the room? A pool in the floor or raised platform perhaps?
- Vehicle tutorial needs DRIVE
- You could use some events to prevent passing to the next room until a task is complete. For example, you have to shoot all the yellow circles to completely unblock the door to continue

Other than that, great.
I did however manage to break down the wall with the hammer at BREAK, and got fed up and just used the T&T RPG for the wand bit instead of the wand.

MARBLE MAN · May 20, 2012, 01:12:47 PM

Quote from: Corbiere on May 20, 2012, 09:14:35 AM

- The SWIM room makes no sense. Why water blocks in the middle of the room? A pool in the floor or raised platform perhaps?
- Vehicle tutorial needs DRIVE
- You could use some events to prevent passing to the next room until a task is complete. For example, you have to shoot all the yellow circles to completely unblock the door to continue

Honestly, people were messing around on my server (yes, i made it on line...) so i kept hitting them away with the destructo wand... That broke the drive, shooting, and swim So, i had to remake them ...
Originally, the swimming was a small pool, the driving had a course, and the shooting were targets :P

Quote from: Corbiere on May 20, 2012, 09:14:35 AM

I did however manage to break down the wall with the hammer at BREAK, and got fed up and just used the T&T RPG for the wand bit instead of the wand.

Well, I wanted wand to be last because they might break the room and everything else...

Did you like the ending?

Corbiere · May 20, 2012, 06:06:49 PM

T'was, I think, a cake. Cake is good :)