It wasn't scary, I wouldn't say creepier than Ben.
Parts toward the end were kind of predictable and a little cheesy; like Melissa being the angel.
The actual writing and progression wasn't bad, slightly long winded, but better to be descriptive than to have plot-holes. :3
"Still the best, 1973"
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