Author Topic: Blockland at War Chapter 1:The Recons.  (Read 641 times)

*Music plays on the chopper*Sgt franky''what do you think the germans are planning to do Eh mike?''Mike''I dont loving know man''As he threw hisBlunt out the window''Me''Guys do we have to talk about this right now?''Evey one staired at me laughing like i was some sort of a joke''recon unit''RPG RPG''BOOM''We all fell out of the chopper'' i got up and saw some of my team dead...''I said''You guys alright?''As i coughed from the smoke.''My recon unit got up''Sgt franky''Yeh...we Alright.''Me''Wtf do you think would fire a rpg at us?''i dont know bu-''Hell broke lose as we ran to cover''forget GERMAN CONTACT''We shot our m34k at the germans''german officer''FURAH,''they kept on fireing at my squad. soon enough our cloak was ready to be used''i said''Activite cloak''After i said the order all our team went invisible''Sneak up behind them they wont see it comeing.''so me and my team snaped thier neck or slit thier neck''The reason we didnt use our weapons because it will disable the cloak.''This is whisky hunter,Germans are now down how copy?''Command base''we copy all whisky hunter we suggest you get your team into  a building or undergound There seems to me large tanks and  Choppers heading your way''Me''Rodger that il get  a sniper to snipe the tank driver and we will move out and make it back to base''me''Ok pvt.anderson get you ass up on that  rooftop and snipe with this msr''I handed him the Msr''soon enough the tanks began to move it''Pvt.Anderson''Sir i see the tank do i fire?''me''Fire in...3...2..1<BOOM>
GO GO GO''we shot our guns at the germans until we killed them all''Me''GET TO COVER!''I ran to cover and so did my team as fast as we could''FIRE IN THE HOLE''Sgt franky said''BOOM''the tank and the squad blew up my squad got knocked out and so did i''I wroke up a few hours later with my team,My eyes where hazed sadly...the young pvt.anderson was killed a huge part of the tank hit his head''Me''This is recon unit reporting in''we are ready misson failed''The reason the misson failed because we couldet finsh the misson without pvt.anderson he was the best sniper on the team.''Command''Rodger that we will pick you up Hold out there aslong as you can.Chapter 2 comeing out next week!

I think this is the wrong section

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For the love of god, press the enter key from time to time

and also the space key before and after things in quotation marks

duee i frekin crid out my eeyes!!!!

dis comic si teh best no dobut!!

O = your face.
/] = My hoof.

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This sucks.

I dont care what You trolls say I will Keep makeing storys untill i Make the perfect one.

I dont care what You trolls say I will Keep makeing storys untill i Make the perfect one.
Lol, we're not trolling, get your facts right

I dont care what You trolls say I will Keep makeing storys untill i Make the perfect one.

For the love of god, press the enter key from time to time

and also the space key before and after things in quotation marks

This is not trolling

This is advice so I don't have to murder my eyes when I try to read your story

I still dont care Im not going stop makeing storys.

I still dont care Im not going stop makeing storys.

Are you even reading what we're saying

move this to creativity

creativity
make a topic
get advise
write better
win

Also why is there a helicopter and national socialists at the same time

Locking due to Being  stupid forgets And being unfair for me trying to make a good story.