Help, tell me if this looks decent.

[Lizzy]

Okay, I've been practicing the anatomy and such. Here's something I sketched up really quickly:



Sorry, the picture is quite big.

Let me know if the hand/arms and the rest of body look okay, please. And if it looks wonky or anything, let me know what I need to do to change and how to do it.

Much appreciated.

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[LurBree]

What is up with her hand? it is going backwards!

[Katamari007]

Is the head supposed to be big on purpose?

Other than that and the hand, it looks pretty good

[Lizzy]

What is up with her hand? it is going backwards!

if it looks wonky or anything, let me know what I need to do to change and how to do it.

I'm terrible with hands.

Is the head supposed to be big on purpose

Yeah. It's a very cartoony style I'm trying. But if it's too big, I can probably change it.

[sorrel]

Head looks fine
Index finger seems a tad to long
Breasts don't seem even- especially the right side,make it less saggy?

[Lizzy]

Head looks fine
Index finger seems a tad to long
Breasts don't seem even- especially the right side,make it less saggy?

Okay. Thanks.

I can fix the finger and the breasts.

[RedGajin]

she has a pretty healthy chest for so young, kind of odd looking
but over all its pretty good for its style, also her arms could use some work, smoother but not straight lines

[TeslaCoil]

she has a pretty healthy chest for so young, kind of odd looking
but over all its pretty good for its style, also her arms could use some work, smoother but not straight lines

I thought younger people generally were very healthy. Huh.

Nah I get what you mean.

Anatomically she's fine for a cartoon. The hand's backwards as had been stated before.

[Lizzy]

Does this look any better? I changed the hand, because of it being backwards.

[Demian]

Overgrown baby with a babby face. But still great.

[TeslaCoil]

Yes

Now clothe her

[Lizzy]

Overgrown baby with a babby face. But still great.

She does look very young.

Let's just say she's 13 or 14.

[Sabbin]

Unless you intend it to be that way, maybe make the arms a but thinner? They don't really match the body to me.

But I like it.

[Aces]

fat arms

[RedGajin]

she has pretty large thighs and arms for such a slim mid-section, you should fix that