Author Topic: Help, tell me if this looks decent.  (Read 2357 times)

She does look very young.

Let's just say she's 13 or 14.
No I mean a 6 year old the size of a 13 year old.



Okay, does this look good? Anything I should change?


Make the wrist a little thinner and lower the bulge line (or whatever you want to call it ) on her left breast and make it a little shorter. Other then that, its really nice, keep it up!

Make the wrist a little thinner and lower the bulge line (or whatever you want to call it ) on her left breast and make it a little shorter. Other then that, its really nice, keep it up!


Like this?

Now I'm feeling nitpicky because it already looks great, but the outside of her wrist could be in more, but its not that big of a deal. But yeah really nice work, hope to see more!



delicious
you are doing well yes


Should give her a captains hat and make her hand saluting while she gives a seductive wink

looks pretty nice, ^i'm serious about the idea though ^

Should give her a captains hat and make her hand saluting while she gives a seductive wink



;-;
That's a good idea. But I don't think I'll use it this time.

you should come to me whenever you need ideas, I've got lods

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you should come to me whenever you need ideas, I've got lods
Cool. I'll keep that in mind the next time I'm stuck.