No, not good. It doesn't fit at all. Look at the models in the op for an example, Corporation is a handicap when it comes to anything model.
That seems a bit overly aggressive mate.
I think its a style the same way Hydralisk has one, and Bushi has one, its not a "handicapped" way to do it.
Its low poly, but with a little more detail.
I don't think it looks bad mainly because I've seen a lot WORSE.
*On the subject of the name just keep it as The Day Z mod there is no need to get fancy.