Author Topic: My short time in japan... Long story. Prepare for wall of text.  (Read 7104 times)

owowe you were in Japan?
Where at. Im up at Aomori Prefecture

Numazu.



I'm so sorry about what happened. That sounds terrifying

It was. And thank you.



Asians, are horrible drivers. Even when drunk.

Are you unable to talk now or something?

Sorry for your lose of sister  :panda:

No, i can talk. Just hurts like hell. Need pills to talk without it being painful.

I knew you were going to be attention based as soon as I saw your first post.

not to sound like a starfish/jackass, but I think im gonna call fake on this.
 
I dunno, it could just be how predictable everything was, or my mood.

But if this acctually happend, I'm genuinely sorry for your lost.

I forgot. This forum has a lot of younger people that do not care for anyone but themselves...

Thanks for hurting me.
Please don't pull the age card around here. And stop pointing fingers at people for being young when you (being allegedly 28 years of age) don't seem to act your age very well.  Sorry for your loss if this is legitimate 

Please don't pull the age card around here. And stop pointing fingers at people for being young when you (being allegedly 28 years of age) don't seem to act your age very well.

I grew up awkwardly. Sorry.



But if this acctually happend, I'm genuinely sorry for your lost.

Thank you.



I knew you were going to be attention based as soon as I saw your first post.

;(.
« Last Edit: June 23, 2012, 09:07:04 PM by spinymad »

A little more detail could be put into character development, as we don't hear much except for names. Fluent transitions between events would also be very helpful. I see potential like a diamond shining out of the rock, but it must be refined, dear. I really do feel bad for you if this is true :c
« Last Edit: June 23, 2012, 09:10:06 PM by rockslide26 »

Wow, your dad threw his daughter in a small pond more than once because you broke his favorite cup?

Even if he was drunk that is not very good parenting...


If this is true sorry for what happened, my life now seems way better after hearing about yours.

What a wonderful first reply...

This is how most books are. Do you not read books?

Hmm, let's pick up the nearest book and open to a random page


oh look


paragraphs

I ran over as soon as i could and called 911 with the little bit of japanese...

The emergency number in Japan is 119. Nice try.

Wait why the forget is everyone calling her an attention whore and saying that her character development was stuffty?

this is obviously fake and the OP deserves to be banned for his fail at trolling


Wait why the forget is everyone calling her an attention whore and saying that her character development was stuffty?

because it was a made up attempt to troll

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     Long ago me, lena, kohaku, mom and dad went back to japan. We had lots of fun being raised in america, but grandpa wanted us to come back to our home of origin for awhile. So we did. Lena didn't like the idea much, Koko, (Kohaku), really wanted to see grandpa, and me... Well... I did not fancy the idea of being an english only speaking asian in japan... So anyways i think i will just get to the stories. Me, Lena and Dad all went out to get ice-cream. Me being a lazy bum, decided to fall sleep under the lovely tree in the middle of the park.

     About 30 minutes later i woke up to tire screeches... Lena was hit by a drunk driver. I ran over as soon as i could and called 911 with the little bit of japanese i knew. Dad proceeded to take the driver out of the car and brutally attack him. After the police and ambulance arrived i was sitting there in tears, screaming at the top of my lungs, (this was before what happened to my lungs and vocal cords). Dad and the other guy went to jail for awhile. Lena was in a coma... Me, mom, grandpa and grandma would visit her each day... But she never got better... The doctors said she will most likely never awaken cause her body was too weak. So we had to pull the plug...

     We pulled it right after dad got out of jail, so he became a heavy drinker, mom always had that dead look in her eyes, and grandma and grandpa would always come over to keep me company and try to comfort me.

     Not long after that happened, about 4 months, it was a gloomy morning... Dad was drunk off his ass. We were all having tea at the dinner table, and dad let me use his favorite cup. Me being clumsy, I dropped it. His face turned red and he became enraged. So full of anger and not thinking, he picked me up, took me outback, and proceeded to throw me in the small pond. With my weak body structure hitting the rocks and being thrown with such force, my upper body was nearly destroyed on the inside, (this is how my lungs and vocal cords got jacked up). I was passed out. Mom called 911 and i was rushed into emergency surgery. They fixed most of me, most... They could not fix my lungs or my vocal cords.

     After that incident, mom left dad, and dad cried every day for 2 months... Mom and dad shared me, mom didn't want to share but grandma and grandpa thought it was a good idea. Every time i went over to dads for a week, he would make me pumpkin pie and apologize. We would also visit lena every day too. After 3 months of being split apart, mom and dad got back together. It's like we were family again... Almost... Anyways, that's my story of the time i spent in japan long ago. I just wanted someone to vent it all out to but i live alone and have no friends that aren't always busy. Thank you for reading. I love you all, ~ Mizore Sohma.
I think I spaced this out decently for you

Wait why the forget is everyone calling her an attention whore and saying that her character development was stuffty?

ok, normal stories allow the reader to take in the character's traits and grow emotional attachment to them before doing anything bad to them.

but now that the author is claiming this is true, I have no choice but to call bullstuff

The emergency number in Japan is 119. Nice try.

I've been living in america so long. Sorry if mixed them up.



And thank you all for caring.

I do not really care if any of you do not believe me, that's your choice. But I do not lie. Lying hurts people.
« Last Edit: June 23, 2012, 09:18:05 PM by spinymad »

how can you understand the doctors if you speak little japanese.

wtf plot holes ERRYWHERE