Author Topic: I Am Awake -large story update inside-  (Read 38749 times)


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I rate this thread 10/10, not using copy/paste characters, doesn't declare size in title, actually takes community's choices, and last of all, hand drawn. :)
I give it a 9/10 to be edgy and cool.
yeah i'd give this a 10/10
I'd also like to rate this topic 10/10. I remember reading through all the pages, just because I was bored and it turned out to be epic! I tried making my own RP aswell but I think it died...
Anyways, good job Tesla :D

You are Matthew Dawn
You awake unconcious in a vast field with only a range of mountains and a farmhouse and large city. You have no memory, though you are quickly discovering your true identity. Your primary goal is to discover who you are. Why you are, and decide what path you will choose to determine your fate. Death is not an option.
Well, you are indeed awake. You have woken up in the middle of a field between a farmhouse and a large city near a large set of mountains. It is anyone's guess as to who you are, much less what you are. You feel slightly heavy in the chest as if you had weights placed inside you. The only thing that seems to plague your mind right now is where you are going. You realize you might be probably suffering from amnesia so you will need something to call yourself. What will your name be?
« Last Edit: December 07, 2012, 01:51:55 AM by TeslaCoil »

Graniterichard McIronballs

Matthew Dawn





It seems you have your temporary ID figured out. Whats left is to figure out where you were going or wander a completely different path.

For now, three options face you. You are located in the middle of a field near a city, a farmhouse, and mountain ranges. Perhaps you should pick a place where there might be people.


>Three other, slightly better options
>Still goes with the most generic name possible
Alright.
Anyways, the city is bound to have people, however the farm might be more isolated and you might be able to contact people there as well. Of course you then run the risk of a shotgun to the face. The mountain ranges probably don't have people there.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aJUnltwsqs



Go towards the City, if meeting people is the quest.

Perhaps it is safer there, too..


You gaze at the city and study it's ugly shape against the landscape. It was probably bigger than it looked up close and the tallest of the buildings almost matched the peak of the nearby mountains. On foot it might take the rest of the day, and you don't even know if you need anything to keep you alive. Do you eat? Do you drink? Do you recharge? Questions began to fill your mind before you cut the rest of them off focusing on the more important things first. Should you do it?

The farm looks closer, right? If so then you should probably go there instead.
Also how can you not tell if you need to eat and drink or not seriously.

look at the ground for tracks
did you walk there?
were you driven there in some wheeled/tracked vehicle and tossed out?
were you dropped out of a plane or something only leaving a crater?

back (dishes loel)
« Last Edit: July 07, 2012, 05:30:26 PM by TeslaCoil »



You make your way towards the farm, since it being the more convenient location. Perhaps you will find someone there and be able to get some help.
You notice that there is a lack of life to be seen anywhere, and was at least expecting there to be a farm dog barking or the sound of an animal echoing across the field. All you saw was a rusted tractor. There was nothing else to be seen besides the house itself and the door to the main house was left open. You think you hear the white noise of a television idling inside.

look what's inside the silo
if there's nothing of interest go in the house