Author Topic: I Am Awake -large story update inside-  (Read 39196 times)

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alternate ending

"
*meet opticals*
matt: snno i...

snno: shh matt, i-

*gunshot rings out, cue silence, cue close up of snno's eyeholes, eyes widen. speed up camera again, medium-far shot of truck, snno hits the truck bed hard, head matter on the ground. cue sad intense music.*

matt: NO!

gun operator: sniper! get do-

*another shot, gun operators forehead explodes in a scene of sparks and metal, falls off back of truck. another shot, hits the driver, truck swerves and eventually comes to a stop.*

matt: *simulated sobbing*

*matt picks up snno and rises to his feet, raises his head and cries out. his cry is cut short by another shot. cue sad music. cue close up of matts face, can see a single "tear" and his simulated opticals widen. he falls to his knees, snno still in his arms. he falls forward facedown onto snno. cue close up of matt and snno's hand, they meet and matt closes his hand around hers. cue medium far shot of truck, camera pans out, fade to black*
"

a real tearjerker, good work tesla

redgajin pro writre 2012.


Don't you gooses know that the romance doesn't get serious UNTIL THE END OF THE STORY

Also this movie is rated PG-WBS. sorry kiddies

Don't you gooses know that the romance doesn't get serious UNTIL THE END OF THE STORY

Also this movie is rated PG-WBS. sorry kiddies
dont worry guys im making a quality R-rated fanfic ;))

stuff.

Abandon kiddy thread,

dont worry guys im making a quality R-rated fanfic ;))
You didn't let me finish

It's rated PG-X

TRANSITION
Optional music track to go with reading!


In massive and darkly lit room the Mayor sat. His oil bleeding eyes were hidden in the darkness save for the occasional glimmer of his optics against the fireplaces light. They gazed longingly at a photo on the desk. If only the accident hadn't happened. His disfigured mechanical face still felt the ghost of what once was, and his desire to make things better filled his heart with an unholy immoral rage. There was no price to great, nor distance to far, he would go to get back what belonged to him. The BlackStar must be found, it's the only way to obtain the cure. The man in the room would sooner exterminate the remaining population than give up the remnants of his mechanical empire. He was close, he could feel it. The mutant that knows its location has abandoned the city. Possibly making it's way towards the giant outpost of the former Great Britain. Greyfields greatest enemy. Ever since the fall of the world nations, Britain has held fast, even after the great burial. Barnabas gritted his mechanical jaw against his human teeth. The mutant, and whoever is helping the mutant, will never see Britains walls.

  Barnabas slams his fist down on a com-link.

"BRING ME THE CAPTAIN OF THE GUARD!"

A desperate compilation of yelling and scrambling noises could be heard on the other side. The secretary nervously answered back.

"W- Were sending him up right now Mr. Mayor!"

"Well send him up faster you incompetent piece of trash!"

  Barnabas stands up from his desk and leans over it. The doctor said the stress wasn't good for the flesh around his jaw. He rotates his jaw a little and waits impatiently for the door to open.

A police bot a lot like Matt enters the room and flashes a salute.


"Reporting for duty, Sir!"

The Mayor grumbled something under his breath and suddenly made himself deceptively calm.

"Captain, the mutant is not in my cells. It's been a whole week since it's last sighting. Even the street goons had found it's truck faster than your force could carry out. Why are my orders not being accomplished."

"Were working as hard as we can, sir. Just yesterday one of our walkers reported giving chase to a small truck into the redzone."

The Mayor seemed pleased by this news. He smiled, revealing a row or mangled teeth.

"Send the aerials in after it. And take the mutant, ALIVE. Kill the others."

0/10 no mutantxrobot love scenes....

So are we the mayor or what?
If so,
>plot evil THINGS

So are we the mayor or what?
If so,
>plot evil THINGS
and examine your desk

and examine your desk
You look down at your desk, you observe a photograph and a pile of paperwork. Traces of your blood stain the edges of the desk.

ask your secretary to please report to your office immediately

Call the hot nurse from 3 rooms down.