A fictional short/medium experiment story about a bar getting attacked

[Cybertails1998]

The last deranged lunatic falls over with a loud thud.

...This evening in the local huge bar was good and nobody expected anything out-of-place to happen. The bar spanned a big lot, first floor being the bar, second being the casino and third being a spacious room leading to the roof.
The people inside were pleasant, if not tipsy. The beer glass clinking, the rattle of the billiard balls and the hum of the air conditioners seemed usual, but one day a plethora of noises were mixed in.

The door flew a good 2 meters before falling over with a loud slam. The barman ducked when his stand was being pummeled by lead, along with the less fortunate customers' flipped tables. The barman dashed into one of the doors, leaving his customers to deal with the new menace. One of the customers, a man in a red plaid shirt and white pants, decided to crawl to the door the barman used, while pulling the table alongside him to avoid getting shot. Halfway through the bar the man found out they stopped firing at the bar. When he peeked out he saw one remaining terrorist trying to block two knives with his rifle. There were crazy people with meat knives at the doorstep, and the terrorists just so happened to stand in their way.

"We attacked first, you freaks!"

They didn't care. However, after the terrorist finally slumps over, the bar vibrates as the air is filled with drunk war cries and people with beer bottles rushing at the crazies. The lone man decides to take advantage of the vicious push, and rushes to the big brawl. Through screams and glass shatters the man grabs the dead terrorist's pistol under a drunken man's legs and dashes to the casino. The people upstairs were bowling and playing billiards as if nothing was happening.

"There's a huge fight down there, bottles versus knives!", the man yells.

One of the billiard players looks at him oddly.

"Weren't there gunshots or did you guys take care of them somehow?", he questioned.
"No, but the men with the knives did. Do you have anything to defend with? Where's the barman?"
"We saw him walking past, his head tilted down and him murmurring something about an attack. Not sure what he needed to do up there."

Suddenly a knife popped through the door to the bar, followed by more knives. The man had to run again, but the door upstairs was locked. He shot the handle and the lock, setting the door free. He ducked in as a knife flew into a flipped billiard table.

He stopped before a door and checked the pistol. It was a generic pistol with an ammo magazine jammed in. He checked the magazine. 4 bullets. He then kicked the door open, leading to a room that, to his awe, contained a stash of weaponry, namely shotguns and assault rifles alongside beer glasses and tables. He also found a paper. The paper started off with a few numbers crossed off, then descended into complex Korean for the entire sheet. THe man crumpled the paper and tossed it into a beer glass. He grabbed an assault rifle and took the stairs to the roof.

To the man's confusion, there was no barman on the roof, but a hook stuck to the edge of the roof. He slided down the rope on the end of the hook and entered the bar again.

The floor was littered with dead people, some holding knives and most holding broken bottles. There were lots of bullet holes and about three knives in the lone table in the center. The man then proceeded upstairs. Again, dead people and knives, but still no barman. Upstairs again, he saw several deranged lunatics huddling in the stairs, and heard gunfire. He loaded his assault rifle and cleared his way upstairs.

On the roof were about ten lunatics trying to run for someone far away, but being met by gunfire. The lone man starts shooting them.

The last deranged lunatic falls over with a loud thud. Far away, the lone man sees the barman with an assault rifle.



trying out Writer, 695 words and 3024 characters, opinions?

edit: fixed a plot hole

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[Yosher]

i don't exactly get the storyline

[Cybertails1998]

basically a terrorist attack that bait-and-switches into a crazy terrorist attack
also barman

[Katadeus]

Where's the barmobile
It needs the barmobile


Ontopic: I like it well enough.