Another House (64x32)

[kimbucktwo]

I was on Red_Guys RP (which never has enough people on... join it -.-) and was building a house. about 3/4s i was crashing continuously (not because of the server), so i saved what i had and finished it offline.

It's probably the biggest house I've ever made, and its rare that i ever complete houses with 2 floors, because of boredom. It's a bit darker than i would prefer because of the bright lighting on the server, and the back is blank because of the terrain that was behind it on the server.
But here it is:

Front


Front again


Front/side


Living room (was the only place where i could put the stairs, it looks out of place there :/)


Upstairs


Kitchen and steps to downstairs


Bedroom


Study


Garage


feel free to rate x/10

If you got it, advice is appreciated :D

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[AQuietBadger]

9/10
this is awesome

[Incinerate]

You did a good job.  The only thing that is needed is furnishing.

[kimbucktwo]

You did a good job.  The only thing that is needed is furnishing.

i know :( in the future i will add furniture, probably a chimney, a bit of garden and some kind of terrain around it
By the time i've done that, i will repost, and add a save link.

I will also finish this on Red_Guys server, half of it is already there if anyones interested :)

[Conan]

Very nice. The dark wood flooring of the main living room is too dark, though. Makes the room feel too gloomy/tense even though there are the windows there to let light in. The green doors contrast badly; use some light-dark wood color. The coloration of the second floor versus the first floor contrasts too much in feel; the upper floor (?) feels light and cozy, like a real house, but the lower floor is much more solid and serious. Try balancing the colors better, both between levels and floors.

Interesting garage design, though I don't understand how the car can turn out of the garage.

8.5/10

[kimbucktwo]

Very nice. The dark wood flooring of the main living room is too dark, though. Makes the room feel too gloomy/tense even though there are the windows there to let light in. The green doors contrast badly; use some light-dark wood color. The coloration of the second floor versus the first floor contrasts too much in feel; the upper floor (?) feels light and cozy, like a real house, but the lower floor is much more solid and serious. Try balancing the colors better, both between levels and floors.

Interesting garage design, though I don't understand how the car can turn out of the garage.

8.5/10

Thanks, yeea the living room is definitely too dark, when i add furniture i will also redo the interior for that room. when i saw the pictures i also noticed the glowing doors :o they were fine on the original server, but sure i will change the colour of them now. They were initially green to get the house out of the greyscale. I'll take on board what you said about balancing the colours between rooms/floors so you get the same vibes in every room, and yes, you can travel cars in/out of the garage but obviously its very bumpy and couldn't happen in real life >.<

[Clix]

Very lovey, 9.5/10, I would love to see it with furniture, and also can you post a pic of the garage?

[kimbucktwo]

Very lovey, 9.5/10, I would love to see it with furniture, and also can you post a pic of the garage?

ahh yes! sorry i took the picture and forgot to upload...
thanks for commenting

[Clix]

ahh yes! sorry i took the picture and forgot to upload...
thanks for commenting

No, thank you for posting

[Obliviongate20]

10 / 10.

I love me some houses with basements!

[Zaxx]

Sweet house!

[Ben Grapevine]

8/10

[SirLancelot7]

I love the house, but the roofing on the lower front part annoys me.  Both on the room that makes up the left corner, and the roof over the door.. they just don't look good.

The main entryway also isn't pronounced right,  This would be one of those houses that, if you added trees and shrubbery to the front yard, I would be confused as to where the door was.


It sounds negative, but that is just cause I only pointed out bad stuff.  I really do love the house.  9/10

[kimbucktwo]

I love the house, but the roofing on the lower front part annoys me.  Both on the room that makes up the left corner, and the roof over the door.. they just don't look good.

The main entryway also isn't pronounced right,  This would be one of those houses that, if you added trees and shrubbery to the front yard, I would be confused as to where the door was.


It sounds negative, but that is just cause I only pointed out bad stuff.  I really do love the house.  9/10

Thanks for the fair comment, however I'm not sure how i could change the roofing over the door way :/

[Cyborg1000]

Cool way better than how most of my houses turn out most of mone are just big undetailed things. 10/10