The voice acting was okay, I'm usually really lax with my review on voice acting but in this case it sounded... I dunno, the higher pitch voice acting made me feel uncomfortable and the angry voice acting felt a little weak. He isn't bad but the overall video was average and it didn't help compliment it.
The video reused the main room build which was lazy.
Could see player name.
Concept was okay.
4/10, not bad. Keep filming, playing with new editing features and whatnot. I recommend paying more attention to hud removal, exporting to 720p if possible in at least 1280x720 res, and paying attention to the details.