[Blockland Short] Insomnia

[Cucumber!]

Hey, everyone! This is mainly my app for Cineblock, but I'd also like to share it with you guys too :3

It's just my take on an extreme case of someone with insomnia, never having Insomnia I can't really call this true. BUT, nonetheless have a look if you'd like, rating x/10 is perfectly allowed and I love constructive criticism!

Enjoy the video!
*crosses fingers to get into Cineblock*

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[Clix]

Oh hey I have this, also the video is good I think

[Mysteroo]

I really like it, I'm guessing you got in to at least two of the spots you were hoping for based on the responses

[Cucumber!]

Yippee :D

Lemme just modify the title...

[Cucumber!]

One last bump. I just want to see people's reactions :o

It looks like something from the twilight zone imo :#

[Fredulus]

This is really good, nice job.

[Kevso]

Creepy, but well made.

[mp7964]

That's awesome! I loved the atmosphere of it. You should make more like this.

[Cucumber!]

That's awesome! I loved the atmosphere of it. You should make more like this.

Thanks! I'm planning on making a music video at the moment, but very soon I and my fellow friends will for sure make s'more videos like this!

[TurnipBlog]

Thanks! I'm planning on making a music video at the moment, but very soon I and my fellow friends will for sure make shmoes videos like this!

They're called smores, Buzz.

[Katadeus]

Insomnia for me is more of just boredom, loneliness, and complete sensory attunement; feeling individual hairs move in a breeze and hearing every sound the house makes.

However, this isn't bad.

[Mushroom man]

This video gave me insomnia
3;

[SWAT One]

I have to say, I like the video, but I would recommend two things to the audio to provide a little bit of mood to the story.

1)  As the title screen fades out of sleep, have the ambient noise fade out, but not completely, the have it get louder to the point at which you begin seeing the character for the first time.

2)  With the ticking at the end, make it grow louder and louder as time goes by after about 3-5 seconds of plain ticking.

[Cucumber!]

I have to say, I like the video, but I would recommend two things to the audio to provide a little bit of mood to the story.

1)  As the title screen fades out of sleep, have the ambient noise fade out, but not completely, the have it get louder to the point at which you begin seeing the character for the first time.

2)  With the ticking at the end, make it grow louder and louder as time goes by after about 3-5 seconds of plain ticking.

Oh wow thank you :P

I admit with the ticking when I sped it up it lost that reverb which really lost the atmosphere :(. Don't get many people like you commenting on the second most important part of a video :P

[Tonkka]

Wow that was really good. make more.