Gas Station Stick Up (Short Blockland Comedy)

[Kazami]

I made this video today with some friends. To be exact those people were: Brotatoe, Reddarkness, and partially Nobot. I don't know why, but it was really fun to make, and I had even more fun editing it. The comedy in this video is very slap-stick and may not fit all people's sense of humors. So if you don't like it, please don't yell at me for the video not being funny.

Link to the video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QGzoX9nK2cE&list=UU7WrvIG6qy9ByzViRsAyZtQ&index=1&feature=plcp

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[Crêpe]

lol, i like your films. Because they don't use the same characters and have a different genre each time

[Blockzillahead]

Plot of the story;

>2 guys want condoms for god knows why.
>Go to a random gas station.
>Asks the cashier for condoms but he doesn't know what they are.
>They kill him for not having knowledge on condoms.
>Herbert starts singing while a Policeman makes his entrance.
>A long "FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF***" from 1 of the guys.
>They decide to blow up the place.
>What The forget-Boom.



I like it. It's random.

[Kazami]

>Herbert starts singing while a Policeman makes his entrance.

Lol, your run down was very close. However, Herbert was dressed as a policeman.

[Ben Grapevine]

It wasn't really a comedy, but ok

[Kazami]

It wasn't really a comedy, but ok

How so?

[Ben Grapevine]

How so?

It was just some teenagers wanting to buy condoms at a gas station, not really funny..

Also whoever voiced the teenager was obviously stressing his voice to make it lower, or something was wrong with him.

[Kazami]

It was just some teenagers wanting to buy condoms at a gas station, not really funny..

Also whoever voiced the teenager was obviously stressing his voice to make it lower, or something was wrong with him.

The voice wasn't trying to be deeper, well, it was, but it was for the character.

[Kazami]

So if you don't like it, please don't yell at me for the video not being funny.

Also Ben. You really didn't yell at me, but I am just saying you don't need to say it isn't funny to you.

[Bahamut]

I like it, it's pretty humorous.

[Extrude]

That was really bad. Music was bad, voice acting was bad. The idea could of been good, but it really wasn't.

[Kazami]

That was really bad. Music was bad, voice acting was bad. The idea could of been good, but it really wasn't.

How could I have mad it better?

[Ben Grapevine]

Also Ben. You really didn't yell at me, but I am just saying you don't need to say it isn't funny to you.

Sorry I assumed you weren't the type of person that only accepts positive feedback like a wuss.

[Extrude]

Make it more compact. A video like this could of been fit in to 45 seconds or a minute. And then, have it actually make sense and not just rely on llulz funny random. Having a bunch of completely unrelated things isn't funny, but actually setting up for a joke or series of jokes that make sense is.

And for the love of god stop inserting random audio and bad voice acting wherever you can.
 

[Kazami]

Sorry I assumed you weren't the type of person that only accepts positive feedback like a wuss.

I accept negative feedback if you give me constructive criticism on how to make what you didn't like better. However, when you just said it wasn't funny and dis on the voice actors that's different. There's a different between feedback that is negative but supplies some good, and negative feedback that is only just to completely hate on the video.