Author Topic: The River [16 Pictures!]  (Read 1829 times)

Built by : Me, and Ghost_Man.

Pictures :

Overview of the area.

One of the hills and some trees.

The bridge and the waterfall.

The cave and a treasure chest.

Inside the cave.

No build is complete without DUCKS!

"Help!"

Top of the waterfall.

"That's a long drop..."

Inside the cave at sunset.

Ducks at sunset.

On top of the waterfall, at sunset.

Most of the map, at sunset.

The forest, at night.

The bridge, at night.

A overhang, at day.

Info : This took about a day to build, my friend ghost_man helped me build it.

Save : Sorry, but we both agree we don't feel like giving out the save.

You may rate and give advice, thanks for looking.
Here's the album of the images. http://imgur.com/a/uWGix#0
« Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 06:07:53 PM by The Big Bad Jellyfish »

You posted several pictures twice, just saiyan.
But for what it is it looks pretty good.

You posted several pictures twice, just saiyan.
But for what it is it looks pretty good.
Whoops, thanks for telling me.

Fixed, I think.
« Last Edit: September 11, 2012, 06:08:18 PM by The Big Bad Jellyfish »

You posted several pictures twice, just saiyan.
But for what it is it looks pretty good.

i saw that kamehing lol


43/50

Considering what you've done here I think you can do better. The riverside and cliff edge are the two main problems; you don't graduate the terrain up to the cliff base nor hide it, and the river doesn't have proper sloping down into it. The size of the river makes it look more like a stream, which is rarely, if ever, deep with sharp vertical sides. You should read up the riverbed section of my terrain guide to see what I mean.

As for the surface terrain, that's well done.

Gorgeous build.

A few things:

Flowers need to be more spread out
Trees are a little repetitive (I realize it's a lot if work, I'm just pointing it out)

Overall, very nice build.

9/10

I looks good, but it smells like five day old garbage.

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I agree that I did rush those parts, which was my fault because I just wanted to get the build done.
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Thanks, it did take a while to build, took up our whole day yesterday and a couple hours today, and we tried deleting some leaves and adding some more,
I looks good, but it smells like five day old garbage.
o u.

P.S. : A few bans were encountered in the process of this build.

P.S. : A few bans were encountered in the process of this build.
Almost all of them were one minute anyways.

The trees need to be less duplocator.

why nu shadows
if you cant run them i can take pictures at 720p
EDIT:Also at 1080p

Trees are a little repetitive (I realize it's a lot if work, I'm just pointing it out)

The trees need to be less duplocator.

And the trees need to be spaced out a little more.

7/10.

Very nice.

Also. You should have someone that can run Shadows and Shaders to take pictures for you. That would be epic.