Alright, so recently I've been feeling like stuff, so I decided to write something. It's kinda poem-ish, but it has no title. Constructive criticism please. Thanks c:
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Nothing left to do
Too much to say
I don't want you
Please go away
Stalin and Riddler
Indoctrinating the masses
Too blind to see through their lies
Attending all their classes
I'm stuck in a teapot
with no way out
scalding and burning
can't climb the spout
My boat has left
Bon voyage, adieu
I'm leaving the both
I've had enough of you
Apologetic glances
I don't buy it at all
Don't even look at me
not passing in the hall
Two pins standing up
Points digging into my skin
Creating painful problems for me
to contemplate within
A flock of sheep
Shepherds herding
Going over a cliff
hitting the ground, mutually hurting
The ship has burned
down to the sea
Stop the salvage
leave the hulk be
Though it lays rotting
on waves of sand
there's nothing you can do
no helping hand
It's a silly war
a pointless grudge
One sided conflict
both tossing sludge
You don't help your cause
you're simply crazy
When it comes to persuasion
you're awfully lazy
Your Tell-Tale Heart
beats a tattoo
I wish it would stop
simply ending you
That's it, any constructive stuff or advice you have is greatly appreciated :D
